VN Ren'Py Abandoned Elvensang [Ep. 5] [Worlaix]

[derpyturdmeister]

As of episode 3, all future plans for NTR in Elvensang are cancelled.

I knew i wasn't crazy when i said there was something about you made me kept holding a glimmer of hope. That someday you would turn away from such a low-tier garbage fetish. And glad i am to see you did so.

Too bad for the cuckold moderator who religiously deleted my insightful messages regarding (god forgive me for uttering this word) NTR , i suppose he must invest into another game thread to get off now.

I congratulate you for your wise decision. The talent you have makes it clear that you will succeed in your endeavor.

The battle for the Elvensang is over... HOWEVER! The war against the NTR rages on. My attention is now needed elsewhere. Farewell friends!

*Flies away on his anti-NTR rocket*

 

[desmosome]

Dev writes exact reasons for axing plans for minor NTR route variations, citing lack of time to flesh out a narrative that includes NTR possibility. Narcissist claims victory in imaginary war.

 

[PawgLover]

The font is way too small to read comfortably and the transition from the cell and then into a kid makes it hard for me to tell if it's a flashback or time-travel.

 

[Worlaix]

The font is way too small to read comfortably and the transition from the cell and then into a kid makes it hard for me to tell if it's a flashback or time-travel.

If you press "A" while in-game you can adjust the font size, though some of the lines will not fit into the text box. I'll make the paragraphs in future episodes shorter to account for anyone adjusting the font size.

As for the flashback/time travel... I don't know what you mean. The protagonist passes out on a rotten cot from his head injury. Do you think it's time travel?

 

[Big Green]

If you press "A" while in-game you can adjust the font size, though some of the lines will not fit into the text box. I'll make the paragraphs in future episodes shorter to account for anyone adjusting the font size.

As for the flashback/time travel... I don't know what you mean. The protagonist passes out on a rotten cot from his head injury. Do you think it's time travel?

Yes. And the rottent cot is actually time machine in disguise.

 

[Hurrdurrjohn]

is there a rip of h-scenes? I've finished the third ep and there was only one h-scene and even that when ur char walks onto someone else havign sex

 

[that1guyno1knows]

is there a rip of h-scenes? I've finished the third ep and there was only one h-scene and even that when ur char walks onto someone else havign sex

The Developer note says this:

• So far, there is only a single sex scene that no important character participates in. Far more erotic content will be introduced in the future, but I suggest you wait until episode 6-7 if that is what you are primarily interested in

So no I don't think there are any others yet.

 

[Heliophorus]

Seems interesting. Will follow for now.

 

[I'm Canadian bub]

I would like to ask, for clarification's sake, is the MC still a young teenager in these first episodes?

I believe the answer is yes for two clear reasons. For one, both he and Sunny seem to be constantly referred to as boy and girl far more than would be considered normal for fully grown adults. Two, they are rather diminutive in stature when compared to the rest of the adult cast. These two pieces of evidence (there are more just feel too lazy to go in-depth) lead me to believe that they still have room to grow not just mentally and emotionally but physically and that is an added component of why this is such a slow burn.

Cause see they got to be actual adults to do the dirty.

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[desmosome]

I would like to ask, for clarification's sake, is the MC still a young teenager in these first episodes?

I believe the answer is yes for two clear reasons. For one, both he and Sunny seem to be constantly referred to as boy and girl far more than would be considered normal for fully grown adults. Two, they are rather diminutive in stature when compared to the rest of the adult cast. These two pieces of evidence (there are more just feel too lazy to go in-depth) lead me to believe that they still have room to grow not just mentally and emotionally but physically and that is an added component of why this is such a slow burn.

Cause see they got to be actual adults to do the dirty.
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They are certainly 18+. But what does that mean for Elves, hmmm?

Lol but for real. Ignoring any implications of age and race, I would put them at maybe 16~17 if they were humans, just based on their looks, thoughts, and interactions.

It wouldn't be surprising if there is another time skip coming, but who knows?

 

[dmmt]

Am I evil cause I wanna bang Sunny 7 ways from Sunday, but also want to suggle/cuddle on the couch with her twice every morning, thrice each afternoon and then agaiin all evening long? (askin for a friend)

 

[UberLost]

Not bad, not bad(´ ∀ ` *)

 

[kartolas]

Typical AVN monologue.

"Oh my god I cannot believe I am looking at her like this, SHE IS MY _____, but I cannot help but keep looking, her ______ are so fucking totally hot- I just wanna shove my _____ in there so badly. Unnnnng..... I feel so bad about feeling like this- but I cannot hold back anymore"

*masturbates onto a sleeping body*

Sweet mona do I hate games with characters who have internal monologues like that. Perhaps this sort of tasteless chaff writing has predisposed folks to expecting heavy-handed writing in romantic / sexual build-up?

Good thing is that those thoughts are always present under a specific tag that can be excluded when browsing. Sad part is this gem would also get excluded.

 

[Deleted member 2220390]

The game is just too good. Waiting for the next update!!!

 

[oTEMPESTo]

Great game but Im kinda racist. I wish I could play as a human lol. Anyways when can we expect the next update?

 

[erkper]

Great game but Im kinda racist. I wish I could play as a human lol. Anyways when can we expect the next update?

Haha, guess you should look for a game called Humansang.

 

[monk_56]

They are certainly 18+. But what does that mean for Elves, hmmm?

Lol but for real. Ignoring any implications of age and race, I would put them at maybe 16~17 if they were humans, just based on their looks, thoughts, and interactions.

It wouldn't be surprising if there is another time skip coming, but who knows?

Huh. I would have placed them as younger. Doriel looks like he is 12. Sunny looks more like an adult- just a very short one; but she is supposed to be younger than him so the whole age thing is a mite confusing.

But yeah- how Elf years translate into human years and how the elvish growth cycle works is is confusing and hasn't been expounded upon. The tallest elf we have seen is Anesteya and the Dev said she is around 190 cm. Doriel at full maturity would presumably end up taller than his mother if males/females follow similar trends to humans. So there are a few questions at play.

1) Do elves continue to grow over an extended period of time- like, 100s of years per-say and the older ones get quite tall?
2) Maybe Doreil is adopted or his dad is a hobbit?
3) Is Sunny perhaps a half elf so she is maturing faster than Doriel?
4) Do Elves have different height norms for genders where female tend to be taller or equal height to their male counterparts?

 

[Worlaix]

Or I'm still a noob artist who struggles with accurately depicting how old a character is supposed to be (nevermind making them look consistent). Don't need to look deeper than that sometimes! At least if you're talking about faces, anyway.

I've never heard that Doriel looks 12 though - maybe that image of where he's hiding behind the tree is a little bit in that ballpark, but other than that IDK. He would have been around 10-12 at the time when he found Sunny.

When it comes to height, I'm more inclined to make people as tall as I want them to be rather than follow some RL biological pattern. Will the main character grow as time goes on? Sure, probably by at least a little bit. Is he going to end up taller than his mother because that is the trend for humans IRL? Probably not.

 

[desmosome]

Huh. I would have placed them as younger. Doriel looks like he is 12. Sunny looks more like an adult- just a very short one; but she is supposed to be younger than him so the whole age thing is a mite confusing.

But yeah- how Elf years translate into human years and how the elvish growth cycle works is is confusing and hasn't been expounded upon. The tallest elf we have seen is Anesteya and the Dev said she is around 190 cm. Doriel at full maturity would presumably end up taller than his mother if males/females follow similar trends to humans. So there are a few questions at play.

1) Do elves continue to grow over an extended period of time- like, 100s of years per-say and the older ones get quite tall?
2) Maybe Doreil is adopted or his dad is a hobbit?
3) Is Sunny perhaps a half elf so she is maturing faster than Doriel?
4) Do Elves have different height norms for genders where female tend to be taller or equal height to their male counterparts?

It could be a bit lower I guess, but 12 seems to be too low. I took into consideration MC's feat of beating the shit out of a man with his bare hands. It seems unlikely for a really young teenager to manage that. I also took into consideration Sunny's rather sizable tits. But anyways, they are certainly adolescents and not adults yet.

 

[monk_56]

Or I'm still a noob artist who struggles with accurately depicting how old a character is supposed to be (nevermind making them look consistent). Don't need to look deeper than that sometimes! At least if you're talking about faces, anyway.

I've never heard that Doriel looks 12 though - maybe that image of where he's hiding behind the tree is a little bit in that ballpark, but other than that IDK. He would have been around 10-12 at the time when he found Sunny.

When it comes to height, I'm more inclined to make people as tall as I want them to be rather than follow some RL biological pattern. Will the main character grow as time goes on? Sure, probably by at least a little bit. Is he going to end up taller than his mother because that is the trend for humans IRL? Probably not.

You are too hard on yourself about your art Wor. It looks great!

10-12 in Elf years I take when he first met Sunny? Or in human years? The age thing is so confusing. I would have guessed he was a 6-8 y/o (human) when he first met Sunny- just based on appearances; but elves seem to mature more slowly so if that was 10-12 in a more slowly maturing Elven frame that makes sense.