I'll probably release the next update with a walkthrough. I also plan to add a screen showing the stat progress with each girl.
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Renders are well done, story so far just enough to get you excited for next update. Am actually excited to see where the dev takes this game, and dont think you need to give mc a shave tho not really an issue tbh think it was more sarcasm than anything hair is a lil scruffy but that just me being ocd
wishing you all best with the game, stay safe
wishing you all best with the game, stay safe
- Oct 17, 2020
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This guy is a cock connoisseur
A penis extraordinaire
The penis whisperer
I had no clue about this lol.
- Mar 17, 2019
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This is a good start. Renders are good and the story is interesting. But, I would have liked to know before having to make decisions that MC was currently banging, at least, both Julia and Yumi. Or, he was banging them two weeks ago. 
Here's some constructive feedback:
Adelle or Adele? The tag says Adele but most (or all) of the writing say Adelle.
English needs some work while missing entire words and some sentences simply don't make sense. Capital letters are used randomly in the middle of sentences, mainly after commas, and sometimes forgotten to use in names or in "I". Plenty of spelling mistakes, too. Even if I wrote in my mother tongue (that is not English), I would have a (good) proofreader or two to check my writing and grammar before publishing it with corrections.
About contrast: Using drop-shadowed white text on a slightly off-white background (especially if the picture under the textbox is near-white too) is rather difficult to see because of the lack of contrast. Either make the textbox darker or replace drop-shadows with bordering fonts with a contrastive color.
But, like I mentioned in the start this is a good start.
Here's some constructive feedback:
Adelle or Adele? The tag says Adele but most (or all) of the writing say Adelle.
English needs some work while missing entire words and some sentences simply don't make sense. Capital letters are used randomly in the middle of sentences, mainly after commas, and sometimes forgotten to use in names or in "I". Plenty of spelling mistakes, too. Even if I wrote in my mother tongue (that is not English), I would have a (good) proofreader or two to check my writing and grammar before publishing it with corrections.
About contrast: Using drop-shadowed white text on a slightly off-white background (especially if the picture under the textbox is near-white too) is rather difficult to see because of the lack of contrast. Either make the textbox darker or replace drop-shadows with bordering fonts with a contrastive color.
But, like I mentioned in the start this is a good start.
Thanks for your feedback. I knew that my writing would be an issue. I'm brazilian and even though I'm not fluent , I decided to write directly in english. I'll try to find a proofreader for the next update.This is a good start. Renders are good and the story is interesting. But, I would have liked to know before having to make decisions that MC was currently banging, at least, both Julia and Yumi. Or, he was banging them two weeks ago.
Here's some constructive feedback:
Adelle or Adele? The tag says Adele but most (or all) of the writing say Adelle.
English needs some work while missing entire words and some sentences simply don't make sense. Capital letters are used randomly in the middle of sentences, mainly after commas, and sometimes forgotten to use in names or in "I". Plenty of spelling mistakes, too. Even if I wrote in my mother tongue (that is not English), I would have a (good) proofreader or two to check my writing and grammar before publishing it with corrections.
About contrast: Using drop-shadowed white text on a slightly off-white background (especially if the picture under the textbox is near-white too) is rather difficult to see because of the lack of contrast. Either make the textbox darker or replace drop-shadows with bordering fonts with a contrastive color.
But, like I mentioned in the start this is a good start.
Sometime in the future I might create a discord channel so you guys can report these kind of mistakes for me to correct.
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If you don't find one, try to get one or two of your friends that are good in (written) English to read your script through. If you know people that are nitpickers or detail oriented minds, their feedback would be valuable, too.
- Apr 25, 2020
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Will there be incest or no ? unofficially of course because you're on patreon
The dev is dodging that question like Neo dodging bullets
The dev is dodging that question like Neo dodging bullets
- Jul 10, 2017
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Well .. find him some Morpheus guy for the skills, some oracle gurl for the brains ...
Only after all of those trials ... come back to haunt them with such inquiry.
Then let dev choose the red or blue pill...
Only after all of those trials ... come back to haunt them with such inquiry.
I would say unlikely - as the back story is contingent upon the "daughter" not being his biological daughter (her mother having multiple affairs).
If somebody made a patch (I'm sure somebody will, sooner or later) then the whole story would make no sense.
I do not think the game should have a patch, and I will not use one if it appears.
- Apr 25, 2020
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OK thx. FYI if she's legally adopted I think it's still considered not acceptable by patreon if there is intercourse between them
- May 29, 2018
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I'm just so happy it's not that same shitty generic mc with the punchable face every dev is using now. Him not being another smoothface is just icing
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Thank my wife. That model was supposed to be another character. She made me switchI'm just so happy it's not that same shitty generic mc with the punchable face every dev is using now. Him not being a smoothface is just icing
- Jan 10, 2018
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Think the guys at P might even have a problem if MC has been taking care for her and treated her as a daughter for years even without an official adoption. Still even without a patch or her officially being his daughter, some dad-daughter dynamics would be pretty normal also in how they speak with each other if he has been taking care of her as if she was his daughter for twelve years or more.
- Nov 18, 2016
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..... I want to accept this compliment... but is kinda gay.
jokes aside I am just good at retaining random infomation I find. heard it on a random bill bur vid that 5.5inch is average, then searched it up and found it was 5.2-5.5 (as high as 5.8 in one country).
Don't ask me how they get this data though, would assume it is random sample sizes. So with a degree of error.
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"Thread Updated: 2020-12-27
Release Date: 2020-12-27"
palemaster are you from the future?
Will we have a covid vaccin for X-mass?
Release Date: 2020-12-27"
palemaster are you from the future?
Will we have a covid vaccin for X-mass?
