Wow lots of talk about my post. As others mentioned I don't really think that Ashe losing her to anyone is a big deal. The problem I had with the Zoey thing is that it was so far into the game, it felt like 2 hours+ in or something. With the whole time before making constant jabs about Ashe being a virgin. It really felt like it came out of nowhere and was forced on the player unlike other the other sex scenes. If Zoey is the intended person for Ashe to lose her V card to that's 100% fine. But the whole scene really comes out of nowhere and really breaks the flow. It could be much more impactful in a lot of ways.
I think I kinda mentioned it but If its important for Ashe to lose her virginity as the sleepover, it would have been a much more engaging story queue if while walking into the hallway you choose one of the 4 girls that could show up to lose you V card with. Zoey still, Fiona (Maybe drunk or something? As to better flow with chapter 4?). Fiona's Mom (Kate? She is horny enough and don't think it would really change anything for the scene in episode 4), and Fiona's sister (Forgot her name, so sad too, it was her party after all. I would probably choose her in this scenario just because they would be losing it to each other which is nice.).
I really feel like it doesn't matter who she lost it to. I just think that the scene it self needs some work to fit into the story. It would be infinitely better if you could choose who you lose it to. However, if that is off the table then the scene itself needs some work. While I don't remember everything that happens I do remember that its really quick to the sex, there really should have been more deliberation on Ashes part if she really wanted commit to it even if she was horny. I think there was one or two lines maybe, but after spending a while with Ashe for a while up until that point it does feel like its a heavier decision than to almost instantly accept.
Anyways, like several people have said at the end of the day its up to the dev on how they want it. I'll probably continue to check out the game no matter what they add because I crave futa content. Yet, if they want to push their game that much further I would absolutly take another look at this scene and flesh it out a bit as people where way more vocal about it than I thought they would be. Figured it would just be me.
If the dev ends up reading this way to long of a post, please just keep working. I would absolutaly give you money if I wasn't flat broke no matter your desision just to have more futa in the world. The rest of the game was pretty good, so don't worry about it to much.
