I would probably rewrite it a bit too, but I just don't believe it's really possible without assuming a pretty stupid MC. As far as "far fetched" goes though, I am not aware of any rich Americans who keep non-consensual (or even dubious-consensual) sex slaves (in the United States). Painfully stupid people, however, seem to actually be pretty thick on the ground. While it would probably be hard, given this beginning, to write a particularly believable "turning the tables" path, I actually don't find the MC's reaction all that unbelievable. You just have to assume that the Mistress of the house is correct and he and his sister really were born to wear a collar and just don't know that about themselves yet.
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I was thinking of him when I said "in the United States." Who knows what he gets up to in the Virgin Islands or in other countries, but the complaints about him in the U.S. was that he hired girls to strip and massage him, not that he was keeping slaves here.
It just feels like any normal person would likely realise the seriousness of their situation a little quicker. This comes off like those horror movie characters who've never seen a horror movie themselves and dont understand what a zombie is.
His timestop/zone out moments, at the introduction to every new female character, feel rather cringeworthy as well.
I wouldn't bother with a turning the tables path. Theres nothing wrong with a narrow focus. Personally I'd have the mistresses keep their domination to a more private bedroom role, a setting where its sudden appearance could be more believable, and then have that slowly spill out into their every day lives until they're completely under their thumb and eagerly going along with it. Currently it's a lot of in your face humiliation and "oh no... our debt" which isn't a realistic thing to hold over them.
I certainly don't want to sound too harsh. There's clearly people who enjoy it and that's great. Just offering my opinion.
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OK, played in the bro-sis version and I must say I love it. Not much content, but it will hopefully grow over time.
Great start and one of my favs. even I get the gag-scene, how sensual is my kink.
- May 6, 2017
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Being dominated is not my cup of tea but HOLY CRAP this is an awesome VN!. Beautiful writing with the renders to match, my heart was beating so fast while pondering the choices for Heather. It gives me the impression that every choice matters, just how I like it!
Now, I'm not gonna say that I expect there will be "turn the tables" path (well... I want it tbh), I just hope at least that we can choose how far and freaky we can go for the humiliations, corruptions, brainwashing etc, just like in this version for example, there are two paths we can choose for Heather, a softer approach or the harsher one.
BUT that's just my honest opinion and preference, how to dev will take this game further is up for him/her (also patrons ofc) to decide.
Now, I'm not gonna say that I expect there will be "turn the tables" path (well... I want it tbh
), I just hope at least that we can choose how far and freaky we can go for the humiliations, corruptions, brainwashing etc, just like in this version for example, there are two paths we can choose for Heather, a softer approach or the harsher one.BUT that's just my honest opinion and preference, how to dev will take this game further is up for him/her (also patrons ofc) to decide.
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The setup and character dynamics are conceptually the same as I've already seen before... I can pretty much, spot on, guess the exact Japanese Hentai Animation Series (and VN) that this VN/Game is based on... The visuals are high resolution and done well... But good visuals can not make up for the loosely constructed plot and WAY over the top characters... For those looking for Hard Core themes and definitely sadistic mental and physical dominance/manipulation, then this is probably right up your alley... A story about a house hold of elitist (and way over the top) women who really don't care about right or wrong, and have very little humanity or possibly even lack souls of any kind, using other people for their amusement, sexually or otherwise... Barely any basis in reality, the protagonist and his female friend, very willingly play along with everything, which just throws any suspension of disbelief out the door... Do not go into this VN/Game thinking it has a good story... Thus far, even though it's early into development, it is pretty much a setup, to be a very hard core porn fest... It's not a complete copy cat, but it is pretty much following the same play book as the animated series I mentioned, just with some different scenes and some minor setup tweaks, as well as not being Asian style visuals... I went ahead and posted my review...
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No penis chopping that I saw... There is a Japanese Hentai Animated series with a guy who decides to work for a rich family (of mostly women) in order to pay off his school debts... And lets just say that he becomes the toy for very sadistic and hard core sexual scenarios by that family... Pretty much becoming their play things... The setup for this one is very similar, without being a one for one copy cat... You can tell right away, that it will be going a very hard core and sadistic route with regards to perversion and mental/physical manipulation... What the current content shows, and how spot on similar it is in it's basic setup and character personalities... I can already predict just how crazy this one will probably go... The possibilities for how depraved it can go, with it's current setup, could go pretty dark and over the top... It's already gone over the top and shows all the signs of sexual and mental depravity... Will it eventually be something entirely different in all aspects? Don't know at the moment, as it's too early to know... For now it's pretty much going down a sadists route... There is a difference between Dominance and Sadism... Yes, there is a Dominance flavor, but it's really leaning more towards the Sadism side, in how it sets everything up and plays out in the end...
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Nice game, nice renders.
But this kind of story is not my cup of tea.
Don't get me wrong I like male/female domination, but only in a tolerabel amount (even if I play a male MC, i try to avoid excessive domination paths)
I just get very angry if characters abuse their power in that kind of way and feeling completely helpless.
It's just not very relaxing to play a VN, where every second you think about smacking a character in the face.
I don't know where the story is going, but if their will be a path where you can take revenge on the Von Stein, I will absolutely play the game further.
But if it's just a 'see people suffer day by day' VN I think it's not for me (if I want to feel miserable I just have to watch the news).
Keep up the good work.
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The dev could tell us if NTR will be added in the future I hope the answer is no
- Jun 12, 2017
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thank god for people who specifically tell everybody else that they dont like certain thing. you make the world a better place, guys !
seriously, the fuck is wrong with people ? do you crave attention that desperately ? if you dont like indian food, do you go to indian restaurants and start telling all the clients and the staff that you specifically dont like indian food ?
seriously, the fuck is wrong with people ? do you crave attention that desperately ? if you dont like indian food, do you go to indian restaurants and start telling all the clients and the staff that you specifically dont like indian food ?
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I think I remember this scene. Weren't they coming to arrest him for misgendering somebody on twitter?Nice game, nice renders.
But this kind of story is not my cup of tea.
Don't get me wrong I like male/female domination, but only in a tolerabel amount (even if I play a male MC, i try to avoid excessive domination paths)
I just get very angry if characters abuse their power in that kind of way and feeling completely helpless.
It's just not very relaxing to play a VN, where every second you think about smacking a character in the face.
I don't know where the story is going, but if their will be a path where you can take revenge on the Von Stein, I will absolutely play the game further.
But if it's just a 'see people suffer day by day' VN I think it's not for me (if I want to feel miserable I just have to watch the news).
Keep up the good work.
- Dec 26, 2017
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It's so funny that you say 'f*** censorship' in your banner, but what you're saying is more or less censorship. If people don't like something they should be able to say it out loud.
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In case you haven't figured it out, just place it in the game file and you're all set.
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No, but if I am with a group of friends and we are trying to decide where we are going to have dinner, I will certainly mention it. It's not like I am here on this forum talking about how I don't like adult games (that would actually be a valid situation to use your particular analogy btw). I made a specific comment on a thread about a specific game that I know the actual game dev reads mentioning some first impressions of the renders (which look fantastic) and how I hoped that one certain fetish wouldn't be included (later clarified to be wouldn't be unavoidably included), all in the ultimate goal of hoping that maybe a single potential fan could have any impact on the way the dev decides to take the game.
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Of course, but you can still be respectful and not call them all 'attention-whores', just because they have another opinion.
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your post was about not wanting potentially ntr to be added in the future. which is a valid point. im talking about people who post how they dont like femdom... on a game that is build around and revolves around femdom.
if you said the ntr stuff in a thread about ntr focused game, then your post would be pointless.
do you go to random places you don't like and tell their customers that you don't like that place ? or again, read my indian food analogy
and there are suitable places to share your opinions.
im stopping here, because i dont want mods to clean up the thread