It’s quite amusing reading these replies. Just goes to show how insecure some men are when it comes to strong women. And as for this being almost a horror story I nearly laughed out loud. The whole first chapter was so well-written and the scenes and dialogues were so witty and funny I cannot imagine how any of this would appear scary. Unless you always have to be the big alpha male and punish those bad girls for misbehaving. But of course it’s a no-no the other way. Oh the hypocrisy.
Anyway, as some have stated already, this is looking to be an exceptional game. Very kinky, very funny (the things Isabella and the Mrs. say are just so outrageously cruel and fun I’m honestly impressed), very sexy, and very beautiful to look at.
I don’t know what more one could ask for, except more of this!
It's amusing reading your post, as well. You seem to be confusing "cunt-faced bullies" with "strong women". I assure you, contrary to the twitter cesspool, these are not the same thing. The writing is hilarious, I agree, but for the wrong reasons. It's leaps and bounds above the usual drivel you find in these games, but I find it to be by no means "smart" or "witty". It's a bit pedantic and pretentious for my tastes, and I found myself chuckling to just how vapid and derivative it was. It reads like a typical fanfic.net story and the sadist play at work here just isn't very stimulating to me. The scene where MC meets the daughter had me laughing, as it was so unbelievably plastic that I didn't see why it was added. Beggar's rags? Lol. Yikes. Pretty sure we're not in a medieval fantasy and even the super rich of today wear jeans. And I'm not really understanding what the personality of Isabella is even supposed to be. She speaks like an entitled millennial brat one moment, then a Victorian era noble the next. Consistency would be nice. I can appreciate the effort, the desire to make it read as literature, and overall attention paid to the authors vision, but I wouldn't delude myself into thinking it's something it isn't just because it aligns with my personal agenda.
You're also drawing some rather silly parallels here where there are none. There is absolutely nothing hypocritical about disliking this, and liking alpha-male play. The issue is that these two "strong women" aren't alpha they're just a couple of cunts. Arguably, the Mistress does have some alpha-like qualities in part due to her position. If that "alpha-male" that bothers you so much was also a complete cocksucking asshole that treated his girls like pure shit, I'm certain the same people "complaining" in this thread wouldn't be okay with that character either. I sure wouldn't. Would some people be okay with it? Sure. All the same, as some people, such as yourself, are okay with the treatment of the MC and especially that poor girl, Heather. I personally find it pretty disgusting how she's being treated because there is no other option for her or the MC. It'd be a completely different story if it was (to a degree) voluntary. But hey, if it gets your rocks off, more "power" to you. However, I'd avoid grouping everyone into one large pot and drawing some pretty ridiculous generalizations. That's neither smart, nor witty.
On topic, despite my comments, I enjoyed the game, and love the high quality models and renders. Heather looks awesome and I'm excited to see where the developer goes with this game. I'd focus a little more on sadist/dominatrix (S&M) play and dialogue rather than just making these two gals into insufferable cunts, however. I think the real weakness here is the author isn't quite there yet with realizing the dynamic between a dominatrix and a submissive man. The dialogue tends to be degrading, sure, but it also should be sexy. It's really my only gripe with this game, and I imagine many people in this thread's, as well. I'm not expecting a masterpiece or something, but if the author wants to try their hand at making a very verbose, and grandiose setting, unfortunately it'll be subject to a lot more room for error than your typical "I can has fuk?" visual novel. Best of luck with the game, I'm keeping an eye on it for sure.