- Jul 24, 2020
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Ugh, I've barely started the new update and the MC's naivety is already hitting me in the face again. He trusted eyepatch guy to easily, and now he's strusting these new people to easily, too.
"Hur dur, thanks for finally telling me the truth about everything, girl I don't remember who claims to be my sister but doesn't show me any proof about anything except some fragmented memories of a forgotten past that are definitely yours, because I have been a part of this magical world for all of 5 minutes and I definitely know for sure it's impossible to trick my memory viewing thing that I still don't really understand. I'll just believe you like I believed eyepatch guy because I'm just that naïve. Yay!"
What's next? Dagon shows up and tells him "actually, I've been the good guy all along" and the MC goes, "sure, that makes sense."
Ugh, whatever, rant over. I still like the story, I just wish the MC wasn't an idiot. Or maybe I'm to paranoid.
Edit: Atleast he handled the conversation with draxus like an intelligent person with a healthy amount of skepticism. But I don't see why it shouldn't be the same with Bella.
Edit2: alright, alright. It was a great update in the end. 9/10. Would have been a 10 if not for the Bella thing
"Hur dur, thanks for finally telling me the truth about everything, girl I don't remember who claims to be my sister but doesn't show me any proof about anything except some fragmented memories of a forgotten past that are definitely yours, because I have been a part of this magical world for all of 5 minutes and I definitely know for sure it's impossible to trick my memory viewing thing that I still don't really understand. I'll just believe you like I believed eyepatch guy because I'm just that naïve. Yay!"
What's next? Dagon shows up and tells him "actually, I've been the good guy all along" and the MC goes, "sure, that makes sense."
Ugh, whatever, rant over. I still like the story, I just wish the MC wasn't an idiot. Or maybe I'm to paranoid.
Edit: Atleast he handled the conversation with draxus like an intelligent person with a healthy amount of skepticism. But I don't see why it shouldn't be the same with Bella.
Edit2: alright, alright. It was a great update in the end. 9/10. Would have been a 10 if not for the Bella thing
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