- Dec 8, 2021
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Grammar/spelling needs work. Pacing is way WAY too fast. Honestly feels like you're in a speeding out of control car in the middle of rain on an icy road spinning out constantly. Maybe if the spelling/grammar issues were fixed this MIGHT fix the bad pacing issue, but I still find it hard to believe that it's solely the spelling/grammar issues making it feel like the pacing is bad.
Honestly, I read what was available out of sheer determination to give it an honest chance.
Graphic/visual wise it's perfectly fine for AVN's (Pretty much the standard for these),and is probably the only thing IMO that is decent to good about this work. Feel free to disagree, I just truthfully believe this work is subpar at best, but realistically it's kinda bad currently.
I am more than willing to give this another try IF and WHEN these issues are addressed as I do believe this could MAYBE be salvaged/improved.
Honestly, I read what was available out of sheer determination to give it an honest chance.
Graphic/visual wise it's perfectly fine for AVN's (Pretty much the standard for these),and is probably the only thing IMO that is decent to good about this work. Feel free to disagree, I just truthfully believe this work is subpar at best, but realistically it's kinda bad currently.
I am more than willing to give this another try IF and WHEN these issues are addressed as I do believe this could MAYBE be salvaged/improved.