VN Ren'Py Abandoned Evil In Us [v0.4] [SinnerMonkey]

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EpicLust

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chikan means molester not groper, a groper is a groper, a chikan is the one who starts with a grope, removes their panties and forces sex on them ie molesting.
chijo is the female equivelant but oddly it also means nympho chick haha funny how chikan is bad but chijo not so bad, i call it sexist!
Chickan molester?
We prefer to call them "chicken lovers".

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ChummyChonka

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Because most people [...]
Fair enough. I'm not a native speaker either though and my English is by no means perfect, but I suppose it would suffice for these kind of games. Well, I probably should offer my help in at least fixing their mistake, right?
Better start my own Patreon where I will offer my services. I'd doubt that I would get much support however.
 

jaredh72

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Because most people who are doing it are not english native speakers? Better ask why the Anglo natives are seemingly not working on games of their own. Probably because a lot are too busy bitching about bad english while not knowing a second language themselves? Sorry if that sounds a bit bitter, but as a Non-Native speaker myself, who expended a lot of effort to learn a number of different languages, I am often getting annoyed by certain part of the English speaking world and their sense of entitlement.

While I agree that it would be way more convenient to have clear, concise and gramatically correct english in these games, please remember that unless the Dev is quite good in english themself, they will need someone to translate for them. Which is a huge chjunk of work and will possibly require expending money they don't have (yet). Later, if the game proves to be popular, they might find volunteers, but that is problematic as well as they will have to depend on people making a big effort, agreeing to schedules and so on, pro bono. Machine translation often is the only viable route.

So cut the Devs some slack unless it is clear they don't care and just try to cash in without effort.
Personally, I agree with you to a certain extent. I don't complain if the wording is odd, unless it's so bad that I have significant trouble figuring out what is being said. If anything, what I have a bigger problem with is when the game is riddled with typos (not grammatical, but spelling). I've seen some games where just about every block of text (longer than only one short sentence) has one or more spelling typo. I know machine translations can be terrible at times, but at least it will give you correctly spelled words (and ones that actually exist in the English language).
 

Zurghi00

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anyway,much better then the first game concept,but in my opinion the faces of characters are a little CREEPY
 

wep

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@Sinnermonkey In fairness the game is still below the average of the actual porn games for both story/game-play (the major problem IMHO) and graphics.

HOWEVER, the improvements from the first release are clear and I can't deny your commitment :)

It is completely up to you, but (if you like) I can move the game in the general discussion or in the development area.
It will make more clear that you are still in an early stage of development and it will remove some pressure from you. :)
 
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Sinnermonkey

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@Sinnermonkey In fairness the game is still below the average of the actual porn games for both story/game-play (the major problem IMHO) and graphics.

HOWEVER, the improvements from the first release are clear and I can't deny your commitment :)

It is completely up to you, but (if you like) I can move the game in the general discussion or in the development area.
It will make more clear that you are still in an early stage of development and it will remove some pressure from you. :)
Thank you for your suggestion, but I like criticism, it does not let me relax.
 
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LazyPanda

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Well there are thousand of games out there and their models looks just the same, atleast your models are new and have tones of capability to do things with them, you have good progress from what i'm seen (english is not my native language like you so i'm sorry for any mistake in my grammar.) Goodluck man.
 

Troll

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Hey guys, thanks for your criticism and advice. I have bad english, bad 3d development and other bad thing. But I'm learn new stuff every day. For now I rebuild game, and create new character.
man , now i can't unsee that ...
 

Led

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Thanks for your advice, but I don't like Daz3d. And now I again rebuild character doctor Sara.
How can you not like Daz3d?! Those models look amazing and very realistic. I wouldn't bother trying to make models that look like plastic barbiedolls, instead, if the Daz3d models are free. But hey, it's a free country, I guess.
 
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