VN Ren'Py Abandoned Evil In Us [v0.4] [SinnerMonkey]

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Overview:
In this game, you will assume the role of Marcus. Opening your eyes, you have no recollection of what happened or how you wound up in this hospital bed.Do you want to know what happens next? Play the game to find out!
Note: Hi, guys. I'm new to game development. Currently, the game has about five minutes runtime.I hope you have fun playing the game.​

Release Date: 2017-12-17
Developer: SinnerMonkey

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Version: 0.4
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[Major Wanker]

avoid this like the plague

 

[Dictateur]

Does she have a liver disease ? Why is she yellow god damn.

 

[Theapedude]

As you are brand new you have a lot to learn. A lot of people are going to give you shit, but just keep at it and you will get better over time. Game is too short to really comment on it, I would say try to make poses more natural, you will get better at it with more practice, they look a bit robotic.

 

[fatedthief]

i think its getting hard to find a passable/promising/somewhatokay erotic game these days. especially when its 3d.
it's just not fair.

 

[FallenLondon]

Does she have a liver disease ? Why is she yellow god damn.

I assumed she was a zombie. Or some supernatural being with glowing green eyes.

 

[Gomly1980]

Do you want know what next?​

 

[wep]

@Sinnermonkey

The demo is too short for be really useful to evaluate your game. I hope that the dialogs are only placeholders. I mean you need to explain things much better and make the story flow nicer. IMHO you must avoid the lips movement, It is really hard synchronized it with the words and nobody in the porn games is doing it.

Keep us posted

 

[Azphel]

I know that you probably aren't a native english speaker (hell, i am not either ) but please, before posting an update, have someone look through ALL the text ingame and fix the mistakes, because just looking at your description and at the screenshots has wiped away my interest for now. I'm not trying to discourage you, but having a bad presentation can be lethal even for the best game in the world, so you might want to ask a better english speaker/(writer) to help.

 

[Handsome Bread]

English is terrible.

 

[ChummyChonka]

English is terrible.

I too would like to know why apparently no one making erotic RenPy games is able to produce at least decent English.

 

[the_high_king]

avoid this like the plague

Usually I like to see and judge things on my own... but in this case I fully believe you.

 

[RobertFPY]

Tks

 

[gsbm]

avoid this like the plague

I will happily take the plague over this.

 

[MikeMasters]

Well, I wanted to see... I thought to myself: 'Be open-minded, it can't be that bad.'
Boy, was I wrong.
Game time: 2 mins, tops.
Graphics: If art style - meh. If real life 3D - bleh
Name of hospital - 'N' - really?
Best part - moving lips of the alter ego

The 3 preview images are more like the whole game.

If you really want anybody to pay for this, you have too seriously rework it and content worth of at least 10 minutes of gameplay. I hope you're genuine developer, otherwise stop this madness.

 

[Etar]

English is terrible.

I cant help but be a pain in the arse when someone mocks someone else's English and then spout grammatically incorrect English like that.

Unless of course you really did mean to say that the English language as a whole is terrible, that would of course be an opinion and not have anything to do with this games writing

 

[Handsome Bread]

I cant help but be a pain in the arse when someone mocks someone else's English and then spout grammatically incorrect English like that.

Unless of course you really did mean to say that the English language as a whole is terrible, that would of course be an opinion and not have anything to do with this games writing

Excuse me, my dear boy, but would you be... triggered? Perhaps?

 

[Etar]

Excuse me, my dear boy, but would you be... triggered? Perhaps?

Nah. I'm grown up enough to realise theres no such thing as safe spaces or "You are triggering me".

I was laughing on the "English is terrible" thing because it struck me as ironic

"u no speak engrisk good har har me makey funny at you face!"

I understand I am nitpicking, but I am very much of the "If I am going to mock someone else, I better make sure I got my own shit in order" walk of life, since if you mock someone else in a flawed way, then pricks like me swoop in and act like dicks

Also, I am 26, my girlfriend often informs me that I am no longer a child and that I need to drop the manchild act and just get shit over with

 

[Sinnermonkey]

Hey guys, thanks for your criticism and advice. I have bad english, bad 3d development and other bad thing. But I'm learn new stuff every day. For now I rebuild game, and create new character.

 

[j3wed]

Didn't know devs are now using clay for their art. Nice!