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Don't worry, it's all good. I just merged the compressed version with the other one.
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Ok. I’ve played through all the content and I’ve gotta say I’m impressed. There’s a lot there. In addition to a decent and rarely used MacGuffin, good story, and fairly intuitive progression, you (the dev) have chosen some spectacular models for this, and the scene choices fit seamlessly. The only issue for me is that immersion gets seriously broken by something that’s likely not going to change without a little help.
Nothing breaks my enjoyment of a game quicker than smacking headlong into a wall of unholy grammar. I mean no offense by this, but it’s pretty clear that English isn’t your first language. There’s a whole lot of dialogue that comes across as Eastern European sentence structure piped through Google translate, then using the most laughable choice of words. So I was wondering… if I did a proof edit to convert that sentence structure to clear English, either with American or British idiom, would you use it? I have some background with copy editing and a good bit of background writing erotic fiction, though none with Twine coding. This is a good game/visual novel. It could be great.
Nothing breaks my enjoyment of a game quicker than smacking headlong into a wall of unholy grammar. I mean no offense by this, but it’s pretty clear that English isn’t your first language. There’s a whole lot of dialogue that comes across as Eastern European sentence structure piped through Google translate, then using the most laughable choice of words. So I was wondering… if I did a proof edit to convert that sentence structure to clear English, either with American or British idiom, would you use it? I have some background with copy editing and a good bit of background writing erotic fiction, though none with Twine coding. This is a good game/visual novel. It could be great.
Hi, I'm glad you like my game. As suspected, English is really not my main language and I am grateful for any help.
Hey. the questguide says that I have to interact with Gina at college, saturday. But no matter what time of day. Gina is not there. What am I doing wrong?
Saturday is wrong. You can interact with Gina when she is at college.
- Oct 13, 2019
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Soon as I get a chance to dig through the HTML and see if I can actually do anything with it I will.
- Jan 16, 2022
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Most clean game i've ever played. Congrats bud. I was finished the game, can't see whats new with Riley, wont appear on quest menu.
Hi, the problem would then be that there are several videos on one page, all of which would play the audio directly. I think that would not be so pleasant.
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I have the problem that my old save games don't work anymore since going from 0.6 to 0.7. Does anybody have the same problems?
And is there a List of the models names?
And is there a List of the models names?
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Hi, if you send me your save once, I could look what the problem is.
As for the model names, I don't have a list right now, but check the changelog, I have listed them all in the respective updates.
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Sorry, there is nothing I can do. It looks like your save has been completely overwritten with the initial state. I have attached a finished savegame of version 0.6. You can simply change the name in the Bedroom-PC and continue playing there if necessary.
I am sorry.
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Thank you very much. Do you know why because it happens from 0.7 to 0.8 as well?
I can honestly only imagine it by saving incorrectly. Do you use the "Save to Disk" option before switching to another version? The file you then create can be loaded using "Load from Disk" and you can continue playing. If you just use the normal "Save" option, the game doesn't know the old savegames in the new version.
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Hey the game has gotten kinda big. I have good internet and shit so it doesn't matter to me but I'm sure people would love it if you could start uploading just the update patches separately as well if that's cool with you
I wonder how the majority of html devs manage to update their games consistently without breaking saves
I think I have loaded a save onto every single update of this game thus far and, since restarting once in first few updates, I never had any problems (which is good because, frankly, I would not do that early-game grind again).I wonder how the majority of html devs manage to update their games consistently without breaking saves