Writing feedback is not something I occasionally do but since the dev is here in the forum and the game is amazing, I'll make an exception. So, starting on a high note, this is by far the best HTML real-porn game I've ever played, and yes, I played nearly all of them. The reason why is simply because it got me hooked with the writing (I know how stupid that might sound to most people) and to top it all that, I'm not usually a huge fan of VN games or games that have a ton of dialogue. This game is like the perfect mix between them. Some may call the story and the structure of the game generic but since this is a real-porn HTML game, I think the dev has managed to create a perfect work, considering all the limitations that come with making a real-porn game. I almost always read the dialogue and find them pretty funny. And the sex scenes are PLENTY. The amount of content this game has to offer is incredible. I think you can easily spend 10-12 hours considering you read the text and why of course play one-handed
So anyways, I totally recommend the game, it's totally worth the time and the download size.
A note to the developer: First, congrats on making such a great game and I wish you all the best in the future! My suggestions are fairly simple. Knowing that you design the game quite similar to the other HTML-type games, I think the game's weakest point is the lack of locations. Must say the college, the office, park, sports centre etc and everything is fine, but it seems the mc is still living under a small bubble with all the houses of npc's. The fairy arc is pretty well-made but I think it still needs some touch. There was a scene with the water pipes going under the basement of the mansion, if I had to guess you're considering an option to put a BDSM dungeon of sorts (which would be extremely cool). And lastly, even though the new girl additions are necessary, I think it would be best if you didn't put one individual new girl for each update. I have no idea how the story will shape up but you might consider expanding upon the mayor's hall, the police or even the media. Whatever you decide, I wish you nothing but the best of luck. Great game my friend!