Not gonna lie, this Update kinda brought me back into the Game. Part 1 was not a bad Game but also nothing special imo. But especially Dora's Sex Scene was really well written, and was the almost perfect payoff for the Teasing and "work" the MC had to do in Part 1. Really looking forward to the other two. Only little "critique" for me would be that the actual penetration Scenes could have been a few renders/variations longer, more in line with the foreplay Scenes.
I hope the Writing in the future keeps the Quality it has right now, the pacing is quite good as well as the dialogues. All in all Part 2 feels, to me, quite improved compared with Part 1.