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Honestly, for me I didn't really like this new version, but well, it's just the beginning. What I didn't like is the haircut of the new Jade, but the new redesign is fine, but with the old hair style it would be a Jade of 10 As for the other characters, they look very good, the character redesign regarding Elizabeth is very good, on the other hand Reily is supposed to be Elizabeth's older sister and it seems to be the other way around, Reily seems younger than Elizabeth in appearance and the way he behaves, that could be improved, that's how the story unfolds, neither good nor bad, in other words it's like it goes a little deeper into what it's about and has more context, for that part good, since unlike before everything was very rushed at the beginning, but well we will see what happens in the next updates and I hope they are not too short, it is like it is a new beginning, it is fine, from there we have to see what happens.
There is also the saves thing, which is limited to 4 slots and 8 pages, it would be good if it had 6 slots and more pages at least 20 and also the quick save page as well.
There is also the saves thing, which is limited to 4 slots and 8 pages, it would be good if it had 6 slots and more pages at least 20 and also the quick save page as well.
I played your previous game. Is it a remake? //If it's a new one. Does that mean the previous stories you created are connected? // Your intro will be very fresh. I think this game is going to take a really long time. If you follow the latest stories you do // I use Google Translate. I hope I can communicate with you.
this a remake? will you change what you did in the last update on zenera too as well? do tell so people can play this remake or not
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That's because those tags were from the previous version... which is still available on the first page.
I wouldn't jump so early to that conclusion, lol.
This initial release seems like a remake of the beginning of the old version. We didn't see the trials before so I have to ask; is this a remake or just a test release for all the new stuff.
Other than that I'm not sure how I feel about the new UI. I'm thinking maybe making the text box border a slightly darker color, perhaps a light or medium grey. The other option would be make it thinner by say 50%. I think it just looks a bit too bright/imposing. The menu in the bottom left is a bit too large imo. I'm thinking maybe 75% of it's current size would look better.
Other than what I stated a above I like it so far. I was nice getting to see some of the characters still in Elysium and get a better look at the background story. The only thing that really threw me off was when I wasn't my character. That part were I was Alisa was weird and a lot immersion breaking for me until I realized it was a dream. Might want to work in that sequence a bit to make it a little more obvious for people like me.
I am looking forward to the next release. Keep up the good work.
Other than that I'm not sure how I feel about the new UI. I'm thinking maybe making the text box border a slightly darker color, perhaps a light or medium grey. The other option would be make it thinner by say 50%. I think it just looks a bit too bright/imposing. The menu in the bottom left is a bit too large imo. I'm thinking maybe 75% of it's current size would look better.
Other than what I stated a above I like it so far. I was nice getting to see some of the characters still in Elysium and get a better look at the background story. The only thing that really threw me off was when I wasn't my character. That part were I was Alisa was weird and a lot immersion breaking for me until I realized it was a dream. Might want to work in that sequence a bit to make it a little more obvious for people like me.
I am looking forward to the next release. Keep up the good work.
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It's a remake. The old story is dead, long live the new story
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I'm not entirely sure how to make a dream more obvious than it currently is, lol.
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I see your question and raise you another... change what exactly about Zenera? There will be a good bit of changes from the Old Version that I wanted to implement; mainly from the Old Prologue to about Chapter II-ish. But a lot of the original story will still remain, just maybe tweaked a bit better.
I REALLY REALLY DON'T LIKE THE NEW JADE! She lost her innocent naivety appearance and looks like someone older and more experienced in life now! It sucks as it was her charm her innocence and naivety! She now looks older and more experienced in life ruining her entire place in the story line as the innocent, naive young girl.
I played the game for the story but now the story seems all fucked up.
1. Girls are older now all look like they are College and not High School
2. Girls none of them have an naive young feel to them they all feel and look like they have experienced life
3. The story does not even feel like the same story.
4. Flow is no longer like a Visual Novel. Jumps all over the damn place. School introduction to girls before you as MC even gets there (DUMB).
5. Stupid go back to prologue and go to next .. very stupid choice for a VN I can't even call this a VN now. I don't even know WHAT to call this as it's not a VN but not a Sandbox either some very weird amalgamation.
No this is not the story I was playing this is something new that I am not enjoying. I fast forwarded it to see if it got better but it is just disjointed and all over the place. The girls are not innocent anymore so trying to write them as innocent is just BS. They have the eyes of people that are experienced in life and sexual affairs. Jade has look of a slut at times with her eyes in the prologue.
I'm very disappointed in what direction this game has gone.
I played the game for the story but now the story seems all fucked up.
1. Girls are older now all look like they are College and not High School
2. Girls none of them have an naive young feel to them they all feel and look like they have experienced life
3. The story does not even feel like the same story.
4. Flow is no longer like a Visual Novel. Jumps all over the damn place. School introduction to girls before you as MC even gets there (DUMB).
5. Stupid go back to prologue and go to next .. very stupid choice for a VN I can't even call this a VN now. I don't even know WHAT to call this as it's not a VN but not a Sandbox either some very weird amalgamation.
No this is not the story I was playing this is something new that I am not enjoying. I fast forwarded it to see if it got better but it is just disjointed and all over the place. The girls are not innocent anymore so trying to write them as innocent is just BS. They have the eyes of people that are experienced in life and sexual affairs. Jade has look of a slut at times with her eyes in the prologue.
I'm very disappointed in what direction this game has gone.
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1. They are in college, not high school.
2. That's nice... period questionmark
3. It's a new remake that is being extended plotwise, there isn't even enough of the story out to make an accurate assumption on how different it will or will not be.
4. IT HAS LIKE 4 SCENES CALM THE FEK DOWN. Dream > MC/Ryley/Elizabeth > Aliza preview.
5. That is because other than the first prologue which is the MC's the rest of them will be optional.
HOWEVER!
You can't really judge the "story" as completely different and something you are not enjoying when it literally hasn't even started yet... we're still making the prologues.
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will you allow the player to kill zenera? i dont like her character even from last update from before
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Pacing issues, especially in terms of the development of relationships with all the various girls. That got remarked on a lot by people.