VN Ren'Py Fall of the Angels [v0.0.2] [13th Sin Games]

[chainedpanda]

What flaws?

I also complained about the inconsistency a lot. Primarily the fact that the protagonist started as this otherworldly being that was almost worshiped by everyone who saw him but within an update or two, he became just a random dude. It was more emphasized in the scene where he got seriously injured when there's no way he should have been based on his backstory.

There were also complaints about a specific trio of LIs that many, including myself, found obnoxious, boring and unlikable. The dev seemed to agree with our argument and if I remember correctly, he attempted to solve this by making one of them more interesting and the ring leader apologize in the next update after people complained.

There were also some cases of characters getting completely ignored despite the fact that they were obviously LIs. Dev clearly wanted to recitify this and started to include them more later because of it.

All in all, all the issues came down to a lack of planning and inexperience of the dev. Many people, including myself, liked the original despite it's faults. I generally think most of the issues will be solved with proper planning this time.

 

[13th Sin Games]

There were also complaints about a specific trio of LIs that many, including myself, found obnoxious, boring and unlikable. The dev seemed to agree with our argument and if I remember correctly, he attempted to solve this by making one of them more interesting and the ring leader apologize in the next update after people complained.

There were also some cases of characters getting completely ignored despite the fact that they were obviously LIs. Dev clearly wanted to recitify this and started to include them more later because of it.

Ring leader? Lol, did I miss something? But yes, later on in the end of Chapter III, my goal was to fix a lot of things that seemed left out. Although, as I said, it happens towards the end of the Chapter.

There's a lot I wanted to fix, which is why I wanted to go through with a Remake, so to speak. And yes... I know... not everyone is behind this idea, hell a good chunk of people either abandoned ship or are waiting for a substantial amount of the story to release... or something along those lines. It's been said many times, and I know I'll never be able to convince everyone... but I'm hoping to have done my best with 0.0.1, and what's to come in 0.0.2 and so on.

It'l likely take a long while to get back to where the story should have continued with Chapter IV, but I think this time around there will be far more story, especially with the girls and other characters.

 

[z3rods]

It'l likely take a long while to get back to where the story should have continued with Chapter IV, but I think this time around there will be far more story, especially with the girls and other characters.

This is good news, because for me personally, pacing was a huge issue. Inside of a week of being on the planet, the MC had already had some sort of relationship/sex with like half the cast, and it was a bit whiplashy. Like, "whoa, slow down a bit eh?" (I realize the irony of this statement on a porn board). I liked what was there story-wise, but the parts with the girls felt a little too fast. All the crying also felt... I dunno... over-the-top? A lot of it felt out of place, like the storybeats leading up to the crying didn't always have the emotional weight to justify it imo. Otherwise I really enjoyed what was on offer, so giving more of that and fleshing the relationships out and making them feel like they're forming more naturally feels super good to me.

Keep up the good work!

 

[Tenchip3d0]

Does MC will become NTR Guy?

 

[13th Sin Games]

Does MC will become NTR Guy? View attachment 3760616

FUCK NO! Lmao

 

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[Posseman]

My save doesn't work, the only option is to restart the whole game. Don't want to go through everything all over again.

 

[Crusher56]

Prologue of mc was alright pretty good but honestly found ep 2 and 3 boring will wait till it gets back to mc.

 

[Hakdar]

Why should I feel the need of playing the same game again?

 

[Niuul]

Why should I feel the need of playing the same game again?

Better story pacing and character relationship progression. The real test will be when the MC starts interacting with the core group of LI again. Are we gonna run in to the same issue of the LIs immediately stumbling onto his junk and getting pregnant or are we gonna have some actual character depth and relationship building this go around. Time will tell.

I enjoyed the first episode quite a bit as it gave a way better look in to the relationship between the brothers than the first version did.

 

[zeroobliv]

I like this game mind you. But I can't get over all the character's weird head shapes. It's like extremely hard to ignore and very jarring.

 

[Ekoki]

Please put a -kinetic novel- there to stop misleading people? at least say (currently)

 

[Yopi Tsuki]

Hi,
Updated my Android Port to 0.0.2
https://f95zone.to/threads/fall-of-the-angels-v0-0-2-13th-sin-games.91376/post-12601578

 

[Tenchip3d0]

FUCK NO! Lmao

 

[Leelaverse]

So is this now a kinetic novel?

 

[S1nsational]

So is this now a kinetic novel?

No.

Once the prologues are finished choices will be given again.

 

[13th Sin Games]

No.

Once the prologues are finished choices will be given again.

^ This. There will most likely not be any choices in the Prologue Episodes, but as soon as Chapter I begins, so do the choices. And this time, there should be a LOT more choices to mess with; whether they're minor, major, fun, serious, etc.

 

[MrBenny]

Hi,
I put together a few minor adjustments for this title (mods and visual change).

• Changed the default textbox, to a custom bottom shaded version...which aids with viewing the dialog text without blocking any of the background images.
• Included the 0x52_URM tool, which allows a user to view as well edit Ren'Py titles (Use ALT M to open the URM search feature). As well this tool can be used to see some data behind the story choices (if info was made available through the scripting of this title.) And this tool can be used to display requirement checks when they happen (later...after the prolog is done, and choices happen) in the story.
• Also included a Universal quick menu mod which hide's the quick menu and other screen items associated with the quick menu...by pressing your Q key. (Used to help clean up the dialog area, as well the ability to bring back the quick menu items with a single key stroke.)
• Included the Universal Choice Descriptor mod, which can display on screen some data that is behind some of the story choices, which can offer points and other game info. (It's not a walk through, but can still provide some additional choice info along with a walk through...without causing script issues.)

Install:
Just extract and merge the game folder with this titles game folder. Then run your game exe, and enjoy the few minor screen adjustments.

(Also, this compilation of mods in most cases will not need any future updates, provided that no future drastic changes will be done to the scripting of this project.)

Regards.

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[Sackbirne]

Oh no.. the next fucking remake Lately I hardly have anything to play here... Either they're remakes or version 0.1 or 0.0.1, which I don't download on principle because there's no content in them anyway...

 

[13th Sin Games]

Hi,
I put together a few minor adjustments for this title (mods and visual change).

• Changed the default textbox, to a custom bottom shaded version...which aids with viewing the dialog text without blocking any of the background images.
• Included the 0x52_URM tool, which allows a user to view as well edit Ren'Py titles (Use ALT M to open the URM search feature). As well this tool can be used to see some data behind the story choices (if info was made available through the scripting of this title.) And this tool can be used to display requirement checks when they happen (later...after the prolog is done, and choices happen) in the story.
• Also included a Universal quick menu mod which hide's the quick menu and other screen items associated with the quick menu...by pressing your Q key. (Used to help clean up the dialog area, as well the ability to bring back the quick menu items with a single key stroke.)
• Included the Universal Choice Descriptor mod, which can display on screen some data that is behind some of the story choices, which can offer points and other game info. (It's not a walk through, but can still provide some additional choice info along with a walk through...without causing script issues.)

Install:
Just extract and merge the game folder with this titles game folder. Then run your game exe, and enjoy the few minor screen adjustments.

(Also, this compilation of mods in most cases will not need any future updates, provided that no future drastic changes will be done to the scripting of this project.)

Regards.

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I might have to keep this one in mind for future use, if that's okay, lol. Haven't physically tried it just yet. You of course will be credited

Oh no.. the next fucking remake Lately I hardly have anything to play here... Either they're remakes or version 0.1 or 0.0.1, which I don't download on principle because there's no content in them anyway...

I would kindly ask you to reconsider, lol. Compared to the Old Story/Legacy Version's Prologue... there's a lot more content and lore in the Remake now, with much more to come. But I can understand the hesitation too.