I've been following this story from the beginning. I liked the original, and recognize your thoughts on changing the plot with Melonie...Lucy is the only real disappointment for me so far...honestly, instead of changing her story, you should have removed her all together. Of all the story paths, hers is the biggest let down. You should have just removed her character from the game all together. The character you've put together for Sebastian, she has no real place in the story...she's an anomaly that you decided to keep in the game for the hopeless romantics that might play the game I suppose?
Jane however is on the same level as Melonie, I loved the update for Jane...some of the story writing for her was inconsistent IMO, but it's on equal ground for corruption and manipulation as Melonie.
I'm hoping you write Lucy in a way that she has a boyfriend that she's hiding, and in some way is forced to cuck him like Melonie will do to her husband. I've been holding back supporting your story financially, mainly because I've been afraid of you sliding into a love story (regarding all your recent changes to the story line over and over again), and pussy footing your way around a corruption story to fit the beta roll model that modern society wants our male population to think like.
Don't let the beta's mind set interrupt your vision any further, I'm crossing my fingers for a good Melonie update next...if you stick to your path, you'll have a loyal supporter out of me and others like me.
