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Ren'Py Abandoned False Hero [v0.39.1 Beta] [Enyo Eerie]

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Jstforme

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I've been following this story from the beginning. I liked the original, and recognize your thoughts on changing the plot with Melonie...Lucy is the only real disappointment for me so far...honestly, instead of changing her story, you should have removed her all together. Of all the story paths, hers is the biggest let down. You should have just removed her character from the game all together. The character you've put together for Sebastian, she has no real place in the story...she's an anomaly that you decided to keep in the game for the hopeless romantics that might play the game I suppose?
Jane however is on the same level as Melonie, I loved the update for Jane...some of the story writing for her was inconsistent IMO, but it's on equal ground for corruption and manipulation as Melonie.
I'm hoping you write Lucy in a way that she has a boyfriend that she's hiding, and in some way is forced to cuck him like Melonie will do to her husband. I've been holding back supporting your story financially, mainly because I've been afraid of you sliding into a love story (regarding all your recent changes to the story line over and over again), and pussy footing your way around a corruption story to fit the beta roll model that modern society wants our male population to think like.
Don't let the beta's mind set interrupt your vision any further, I'm crossing my fingers for a good Melonie update next...if you stick to your path, you'll have a loyal supporter out of me and others like me.
 
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AlexLee

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Jstforme said:
I've been following this story from the beginning. I liked the original, and recognize your thoughts on changing the plot with Melonie...Lucy is the only real disappointment for me so far...honestly, instead of changing her story, you should have removed her all together. Of all the story paths, hers is the biggest let down. You should have just removed her character from the game all together. The character you've put together for Sebastian, she has no real place in the story...she's an anomaly that you decided to keep in the game for the hopeless romantics that might play the game I suppose?
Jane however is on the same level as Melonie, I loved the update for Jane...some of the story writing for her was inconsistent IMO, but it's on equal ground for corruption and manipulation as Melonie.
I'm hoping you write Lucy in a way that she has a boyfriend that she's hiding, and in some way is forced to cuck him like Melonie will do to her husband. I've been holding back supporting your story financially, mainly because I've been afraid of you sliding into a love story (regarding all your recent changes to the story line over and over again), and pussy footing your way around a corruption story to fit the beta roll model that modern society wants our male population to think like.
Don't let the beta's mind set interrupt your vision any further, I'm crossing my fingers for a good Melonie update next...if you stick to your path, you'll have a loyal supporter out of me and others like me.
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I see what you are trying to say, and in one way I agree. I love the way the dev have made the game with Jane, but I think Lucy is a nice change from Jane. It looks like she`ll develope into some brat that dares to stand up to MC. Obviously that is gonna change, but I like that she challenges him. And to be honest, she is to hot to remove completely from the game.
 
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doe50818

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This update left me confused. The whole relationship dynamic is all over the place. First she pretends to be a virgin but doesn't object to being screwed "for the first time" in such a menial way, then when she is having sex a second time somewhere else, she also behaves like it is her first time. The main character is even worse though. He can go from respecting her wishes in one sentence, to going back on his word and being demanding in the next. It's like I'm seeing two schizophrenics trying to hook up.

The scenes are set up properly, the renders are some of the best I've ever seen, but then the dialogue lacks the sophistication and consistency required to make this whole back and forth work. It's a mess, because you see what the intention was, you see the niveau of the entire repartée which it has the potential to be at, but then it flops with one wrong sentence spoken seemingly out of turn, and out of character.

I was able to continue a save from last October by the way, without a single renpy error.
 
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radohak

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Bard Jesus said:
The game has full on sexual content. It has the vaginal sex tag so its weird you mentioned the tags then forget they exist in the same sentence.
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Yep, ain't it weird? Must be some reason behind this?

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As your reason is that you looked at the front page tags.
 
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flylupus1980

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The photo is nice, the story can have some improvement definitly in Steffany Tiffany ( Melanie's daughter ), when she come to MC's home.
 
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megaplayboy10k

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Well, the mom and daughter look like they're a few "private conversations" away from straight up fucking each other, which is awfully convenient for the main character, I guess. "Mom, do I have an ugly pussy? No, honey, let me put my face between your legs to reassure you..."
 
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damndor

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Haha, thiiis can be interesting, absolutely! I compleeetely forgot it was the prologue because i kept on thinking about my incident when i lived in the city, as i too experienced to have a girl like Lucy who ended up staying with me for "a while"... I love when i play these kinda games that "hits" me this good. After a good 30 mins, the prologue ended, and i was like "oh wow! if that was the prologue, how will the rest of the game be like?!" - I cannot waaait to continue with the rest of the story now! But yes, i am thoroughly enjoying the game so far, THAT'S certain! :)
 
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Incognito Penguin said:
"New start of Melanie's story. (I added a lot of new scenes) Her house will be closed until the moment you will finish the events at your work with her. (Melanie's story was changed for the sake of the new concept and gameplay. No old events were deleted, but all of them were changed.)" - Changelog

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I'm assuming you didn't play last update. Because this new update focuses on Jane only - Changelog.
and having to start over...again, I'll skip this update.
 
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ohhaiguize

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Just played the recent release v0.35 and I'm slightly dissapointed, but its still a good game. The size of this update is way too small for like 3 to 4 months of work, no wonder people are frustrated with this developer. All in all this update to Janes content is ok, 6/10 writing, like others have said the conversations between sebastian and Jane meander all over the place from solid good domination (what it seems her story is going to be) to weak romance confusion, dont get me wrong none of it is really bad just inconstant and sometimes lame. Renders are still 8/10 pretty but have the same problem of lacking emotion. I'm going to stick around but after the dev butchered melonies story im losing faith.
 
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nuclearbomb

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cxx said:
want ntr? find other game

don't want ntr? play this game (has a quite a much of content just not sexcontent).
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Well last time I asked Enyo so is the game supposed to have/get NTR content, if nothing have changed recently that I havent seen then your comments about this is bull. Oh and before you say anything. This game have had some type of NTR content since it was first released 2 years ago, and the reason the ntr scene was removed from the twins was because he was rewriting their story.

And dont know if you followed the ‘extreme’ dom route with Jane but possible sharing and/or NTR content is being openly suggested by the mc in the dialogue with her.

Pombogiro No NTR content as of now, but if it will be like before the rewrite so will it be 100% avoidable.
 
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