Ren'Py Abandoned False Hero [v0.39.1 Beta] [Enyo Eerie]

[evildead]

epic game.keep up the good work 10/10

 

[Hyped]

This feels like the Justice League of porn games. Pretentious take on what should've been a fun fictional universe. Renders are clean, the UI and code seems well done though.

Seems like yet another dev who just wants to tell some fantasy VN story and adds the adult part in just for the money. Nothing erotic here for the moment.

 

[zzxxccvvbbnnmm]

Animation is awesome, hope story also be great , the characters are looking dope looking forward for updates and can u release this game for Android also it will be better to run in Android (more convenient)

 

[xtssgh]

Nice render!Nice models!

 

[Tony_Stark]

I'm really glad that there is no incest in this one and NTR has some decent perspectives.

yeah, let's go NTR :eazyHype:

 

[UncleVT]

Added Mac version to OP.

Thanks @Enyo Eerie

 

[redknight00]

CG RIP:

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[thecardinal]

how much content is in the current version/demo? is it still in "blue-ball' stage ?

...it's a 0.1, what do you mean 'still?'

 

[Enyo_]

1) A plot twist is when one of the NPCs would pull something like that. As the MC, doing that with no indication beforehand, i.e.: preparing or obtaining fake documents ahead of time, makes it a plot hole. You, as the writer, may know what is or will be happening but, as a player with no warning, it's a bit much.
2) Again, as the MC, you (supposedly) know what you were doing when the prank/hazing took place. Somehow using his phone to contact her, using the same cologne as him, dressing as him so she would mistake the prankster for him when blinded by a light to prevent seeing his face, blindfolding her (without her first noticing a room full of people?) and even finding someone with a similar voice when he shouted at her is way over the top for a simple prank by co-workers.
If he was indeed involved, it would have been a plot hole, not a twist. If he wasn't involved, it was way too elaborate to be a simple office prank.
3) Your discussion with Mark about the pictures in his bedroom. If you're going to discuss them, shouldn't they have been shown somewhere in the room or have been seen in a portfolio first?

UPDATED: You're right again. Everything else I wrote here before was complete bullshit

 

[Enyo_]

I like the game so far. The renders are nicely done and not over exposed or bright like so many other games suffer from.

Since this is a text-heavy game, I'd suggest putting the rollback option back in the game, at least during dialogues. Same goes when choices are presented, leave the last piece of dialogue on the screen so you can re-read the final sentences before picking a choice.

The workplace "structure" reminds me of and seem to be in many other games. I'd change it for the sake of originality as the rest of the rendered scenes do look unique in style and structure.

I'd also suggest adding a quest / to-do list if it isn't already planned. Especially useful when those seven characters are being developed.

Visual suggestions;
- some icons could use tool tips such as the book icon and forward time icon
- widen the choice selection box so answers take one line
- streets look empty; maybe populate it a bit with cars and pedestrians
- the protagonist's face icon looks dark and scary, fits the "false hero" but maybe make it a bit less evil mastermind looking

Thanks for the comment and all your suggestions. I really appreciate it. Sorry, sometimes I don't have time to answer quickly, because I'm working on my game, but I'll try to answer to everybody eventually.
Your post gives me ideas for a future polls, thanks for that.


1.I turned off roll back option to save you from a lot of bugs that will may occur. Also I thought that the rollback option will add cinematic point to the game.

2. About workplace I agree with you. I was going to change it long ago, but for now I don't have time for it.

3. Quest / to-do list. I certainly was going to do that. This is not yet implemented feature which I called "The diary." There you'll be able read what to do next and etc.

4) "Streets look empty; maybe populate it a bit with cars and pedestrians"
I tried it, believe me. Unfortunately, I have to reject this idea for now. At this moment, my computer will die (render will never be finished) if I add something more on the street. But as soon as I upgrade my gear, I will do that.

 

[Enyo_]

oh really? this ntr crap? I hope that you can switch off because with this crap you already know what happens then in the game the mc is permanently fucked ready made and gets nothing in the series and ends up as a total failure because all others can do what they want only the mc then you can not do anything that you know already from all the other games so make this dirty ntr crap optional

ok i just started to play the game and at the first opportunity my fear of the mc is a miserable sissy and a total idiot because if I already read how he hollens at a handshake udn almost burst into tears then it will be real bad and then the idiot lets this intrusive bastard take place

at the table and then take the gir even after secunden with him and the mc goes with pinched cock home omg that says as good as everything from what a total failure of the mc is and will be if it starts already holyschit and I was hoping that it will be a game with a mc who still has his balls and is not castrated and acts like a pussy

Take it easy, man. This is just a game.
I guess you was confused and didn't know that it's very well known universe and well-known characters.

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[Enyo_]

This feels like the Justice League of porn games. Pretentious take on what should've been a fun fictional universe. Renders are clean, the UI and code seems well done though.

Seems like yet another dev who just wants to tell some fantasy VN story and adds the adult part in just for the money. Nothing erotic here for the moment.

I'm planning to do so much porn in my game that, in future, you'll be laughing out loud at your comment

 

[Enyo_]

Animation is awesome, hope story also be great , the characters are looking dope looking forward for updates and can u release this game for Android also it will be better to run in Android (more convenient)

Sorry, I can't do it for now.

 

[B_023]

Ok, so is there NTR in the game right now?

If there is, is it good or bad?

Don't get me wrong, I can enjoy almost anything as long as it is good but most people make really bad and cringy NTR sections.

So, if anyone has played it, is there NTR in the game, is it ok? Avoidable?

 

[jpsimon]

Those cinematic renders are absolutely beautiful. And the Superman universe theme is really intriguing. I mean, it looks like there's actually a story in there, and having a hashed out story is more rare than ass-fucking your sister around here. Easily at the top of my watch list. Good luck, boss!

 

[Shiva11]

Sorry, I can't do it for now.

Graphics are VERY well done and story line looks promising. I can tell that you have done some serious thinking about the characters and how they will interact. Looking forward to further developments in this fine effort.

 

[AlienAnal]

dat ass in the shower pic!

 

[Mikedazz1]

excellent game

 

[DiroGoodboy]

This damn marvelous game press all my right buttons.
The kind of game I'm willing to put my money into.
I haven't even finished the current build and I already can't wait for more updates.

 

[malacis]

The story can seem a bit confusing at times and translations a bit rough, but I really enjoyed the art, characters, navigation and overall "feel" of the game. This has amazing potential and I'm really looking forward to next updates!