This is a great game bro!
Is Awesome, the scene really touch my heart!
But maybe too sad, another way to introduce it is to catch!
Makes me wonder what's going to happen next. p.s some scenes feel ntr hope we won't have it in the future!
Cool, his actions should be celebrated then! We've all been raised on this notion that there is nothing more virtuous and righteous than vengeance. I was simply hoping for something more nuanced, like I said. That's not a judgement, that's just wishful thinking. If your claim is that this game is an introspection into morality then I could see myself giving it a shot based on such a recommendation. I apologize for my skepticism in a piece of erotic literature achieving that. I wouldn't have made a post like that if I wasn't genuinely interested in what others had to say. Thankyou!
The story is nice, but Lilly's death still gave me a sour taste to my mouth. I actually liked that character. Anyway nice writing, and good luck on the project.
So, the first chapter is the prologue and how the MC gets to know two girls, the shy lovely one and the crazy sexy one, who obvs fall both for him hard, then things happen and he has to leave for a looong while. So the first chapter is basically just pre-story which most such games would just skip.
The writing is so-so but overall decent, the renders are good and the animations surprisingly well done and fluid.
The MC talking to us / breaking the 4th wall gets old quick and is a bit dragging, the overall tone suggests that the game will likely not shy away from harder content and it does a head start with some heavy drama - but the leading motif of both girls is/was true love and romance (or whatever passes for it in a porn game anyway), so it's a somewhat classical 'through the darkness into the shady red light' story..
I would hope this is a more the writer is the guide and not literally as if the writer doesn't know where the story is going until they start writing the next chapter or whatever, having this stuff mapped out in really important to help keep things on track, not having a real plan on how you're going to get to the beats you want to hit is how you write yourself into a corners like George RR Martin has since the fourth book and fifth books in A Song of Ice and Fire and continues with Winds of Winter after almost 11 years since the last book came out.
Well... This is a little difficult because she is already dead.
I already have plans for her to appear in some memories, but this will not appear too much.
I hope players can focus more on the girl who will appear in the future.
I kinda wish the dev was here to explain more about what this game is supposed to be, than a simple generic overview that tells us nothing about what the game's goal ultimately is lmao.