Came across this avn today
Really liked the plot so far
But didnt really enjoyed with how dev has portrayed the mc
He is a 35 years old guy(might be incorrect with age assumption), but his mentality is like a 13 year old guy who is seeing a girl for the first time
Also i didnt like the fact that dev is not really just coming clean whether ellie is mc's or lucas's daughter, im leaning towards mc but u can never be sure lol
By doing this i think he wants to keep readers on their toes, tbh its working, but i dont really like the approach
Would have been much better if he did something where mc directly confronts olivia abt ellie
And if she really is lucas's daughter, dump olivia's ass, and continue with his life
Other than that i really enjoyed this avn and hope to see it getting continued in the near future, if the dev ever decides to return and continue with his work