Sadowdark is entitled to his opinion.
As I do with all those who leave a review, I dropped him a PM thanking him for taking the time to do so. (I learn something from each review, positive or negative.)
In our subsequent PM exchange, he described a few of the things that he would have done had he been creating this project.
While
the dialogues treat the viewer as if he were mentally retarded
might be a
bit harsh, IMHO, I understand the suggestions he expressed, and I'm fully aware of my limitations as a writer. There are dozens of ways any particular project can be expressed - I went one way, he would have gone another. So be it.
OK, 'nuff said. Back to working on the next release.