It's like going down the sidewalk and coming across a big old dog turd in your path. Do you step in it and get your shoes dirty, or do you walk around it and keep your shoes clean. Or do stand there and complain hoping that someone will come along and clean it up so you can go along your merry way. I find it funny that so much anxiety is created by something that is so easily remedied.
Oh man, I actually a bit disappointed you said that. I was hoping you'd develop Becky a bit more and slowly break her. If you're saying climax being close, I can only assume she gets dicked by the cops and Parker finding out. Which IMO is a bit too soon as I wanted different types of sexual favors / tension before that.That being said, I'm going to break one of my normal rules just a leetle bit, and let the world know that the "b" path is nearing its climax. ("Climax" in the "novel" sense! Get your mind out of the gutter!
Well, the "a" route was essentially the one that JohnCBB had laid out when we started things. I threw the "b" route in because there were parts of it I wanted to include, and they just didn't fit in the "a" part.
Right but It would be even better if it was done by his friend...
Sounds great, actually. It helps with the greatest issue of this kind of novels-without-choices.
Added bonus points if the MC is watching and she realises he betrayed her.
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