VN Ren'Py Completed Fantasy School [v1.0] [Darklender Studios]

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You play as a guy who jusst came out of a coma. You meet a succubus named Lilly who will help you through the story. You will learn about your mother's side of your family. There is a lot of secrets about your background that are being kept from you. Learn what they are and meet lots of girl. And with a succubus with you this story can only steer you to an big harem. Enjoy and hope you like this developing story.​

Thread Updated: 2023-11-27
Release Date: 2023-06-22
Developer: Darklender Studios
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Version: 1.0
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Language: English
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VenustusAltus

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I'm really liking the game so far, but it really needs an editor or something, because right now It's painful to read most of the lines.

I'm sure art will improve as you do it more, but the writing should really be cleaned up ASAP
 
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you know, I play quite a few succubus/coma/harem stories, what's one more gonna hurt. I guess we'll find out

Edit: I agree with the others.....I think my eyes are bleeding from the spelling and grammar. Needs editing desperately.
 
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Yeah, the Dev needs to improve either his English skills or he needs an editor.
It throws you totally out of the story.

But there are other parts of the story that are quite confusing and irritating in my opinion.
MC wakes up from a coma, can speak, and is top fit? I don't think so.
The doctor implied they had patched him up. Injuries take some time to heal and if he was in a coma the entire time
he can not move or speak shortly after awakening. Porn logic I guess. ^^

Awakening and meeting a succubus should be quite frightening from what I've read. ^^
Why are Angels and Demons friendly to each other?

Adoptive grandmother and adoptive mom seem to be cloned, only the hair color is different. ^^

Why does the grandmother have the same last name as the MC?
His adoptive dad was an asshole, I don't think he took the last name from his wife.

What else...?
Ah, I never met a doctor who offered his/her first name.
A nurse would never give you a handjob. That's unprofessional and she can lose her job.
Yeah, must be the porn logic. ^^

Overall it's okay-ish but nothing outstanding.
 
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Virulenz

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Except for 1-4 misspellings per line it was pretty nice, i'll wait for the next update, but please, let someone proofread.

There is a name bug...sofia the owner of sofias cafe talks as emma with us ^^
 
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Version 0.1 will get a spell and grammer check.
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Today 5 Januari I will make an update hopfully I will be done today. The game will get a spell and grammer check. English is not my nativ language but I do my best. Now I will use Grammerly to make the game easyer to enjoye. Thank you. I will ad a new dewlog when it is done. Thank you for all the downloads on the first day thats insane 110 downloads in one day that made me really happy.
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You are a demigod with a succubus groupie and all you want is moving stuff? Better go for a charming aura and addictive cum, then the girls can move stuff for you ^^
 
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Proofreading is definitely needed. Can't say for anything of the game content though, there's not much happening right now.
 
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so is the only difference between version 0.1 and 0.2 that it says version 0.2 on the main menu? I tried the mega link pixeldrain link and the download from itch.io and that was the only thing different it even ends saying that it's the end of version 0.1 and that the dev hopes you want to play version 0.2
 
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Haha, I wasn't sure but I thought as well that this version ends where 0.1 ended. ^^
 
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