Played chapter 1 - 7.
Would have been nice to name character, but understandable to why that is not allowed.
Chapter 3 Vera in Bar with Joey and David "Aww c'mon man..." is shown to be said by Joey, but the Text says it is by Vera.
"you got their alive" : there
The "oh gods" during sex is a bit much, seems to be the thing most said in the game.
Most other typos and the like are done on purpose. I think I saw most of the text in the game, so can't be sure that is all of it.
Pretty good game, a bit heavy on linearity but the padding makes it not feel as forced.
A bit heavy on the 4th wall breaking. I think there is at least 1 to 2 or more per chapter?
All in all a good game.