Mixed feelings about this one.
Reading about patreon poll in the other game thread I expected this to be a typical incest story about guy meeting his mother and sisters for the first time. It is a cliche but for a good reason. Its a safe choice that always works. Here story tries to be something bigger than that. Could end up great, could end up terrible. Only time will tell.
Game is really heavy on main characters inner thoughts. They are either reiterating stuff we already know or just about random irrelevant things. Very wordy and boring stuff.
The way main character written is the biggest meh part to me. We as player have very little agency over him. Offering the house to Melissa after exchanging like 50 sentences with her? Pure cringe. Erika giving us clingy/preachy speech on a bench about her being nothing to mc and we cant talk back? Mc had like 4-5 short conversations with her, she IS nothing to him. Her expecting mc to change his life plans because of her is frankly ridiculous. The game acts as if mc knows Melissa and Erika for years and it just feels absurd.
Moreover the game tries to give mc too much personality. This is a game with faceless protagonist, he is supposed to be our avatar of sorts but here writing gives him all those backstories and character traits that are just not needed and could ruin immersion. You cant write a faceless protagonist in interactive media the same way you would write a normal protagonist in a book. I wish his default personality was more neutral and we as a player would choose whether to be a grandiose saint that he currently is or be something else.
Sour things aside, productiong quality here is great. Girls look great. Definitely gonna check out later updates.
Because Tiffanys pussy is very noice
Forgot to add. Imagine making a game over scenarios in lewd visual novels in year 2022 of our lord.