Fan Art Fashion business fan art

[KingBel]

My try for maid

Amazing job! The stockings definitely look a lot closer to the original than mine do

 

[uncleomf]

 

[uncleomf]

I think the second one is pretty good.

 

[Mr. Yeti]

I think HeadSize(or volume) for hairs must be bigger. Hair is too slick

 

[Mr. Yeti]

Amazing job! The stockings definitely look a lot closer to the original than mine do

Thanks, like I said before, Mystique 2 is better choice for stockings in that case. Or

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can be used, it is very close, but still not it.

 

[KingBel]

Thanks, like I said before, Mystique 2 is better choice for stockings in that case. Or

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can be used, it is very close, but still not it.

Sure. Will update my wearables preset a bit later.. also will work on some waitress images.

 

[uncleomf]

Are you rendering in filament? I'll give you advice but I am not used to filament since I render in iray.

I am rendering in Iray

 

[Deleted member 687376]

I am rendering in Iray

Really? Her skin tone looks like it is rendered in filament. Haha anyways I recommend creating a depth of field to separate the subject from the background. Maybe get the camera closer to the model. My eyes are drawn more towards the background than the model.

You could also render in portrait to focus only on the model.

 

[uncleomf]

Okay guys, I need your advice. How can I improve this scene? Is the Camera focused? The main part is trying to understand how the DOF works.

 

[Mr. Yeti]

Maybe position of camera in front of girl, from above to down and slightly sideways(Underbelly must be partially visible behind her) will be better? Then girl will take bigger portion of the frame and you can display some emotion on her face? And Underbelly not so important(if he fully clothed) and can be not in focus. And when she take off her clothes you can reverse the scene and make it from his point of view by placing camera behind him. I like more position of camera in third picture(black and white). You can turn camera clock-wise even more so second man can enter the frame.
Also the light is not on girl. She is a center of scene, don't you think, but Underbelly is illuminated better than her(on first image).
I called her the "girl" because I cannot recognize who it is - Melanie or Monica(they have the same hair in the game). That is why I proposed position of the camera that make her face more visible.
imho

 

[uncleomf]

"Inspecting the auction item!"

 

[Mr. Yeti]

"Inspecting the auction item!"

How about turning her head to camera? She still can have her head slightly bended, but we will see more of her and you can present it as if she afraid to look at both of those men.

 

[uncleomf]

How about turning her head to camera? She still can have her head slightly bended, but we will see more of her and you can present it as if she afraid to look at both of those men.

Almost ready

 

[uncleomf]

 

[uncleomf]

To be continued...

 

[KingBel]

To be continued...

Keep up the great work.. You will be a pro in no time!

 

[uncleomf]

What tattoo would be beautiful on Melanie?

 

[uncleomf]

 

[uncleomf]

This one is pretty good as well.

 

[uncleomf]

Maybe position of camera in front of girl, from above to down and slightly sideways(Underbelly must be partially visible behind her) will be better? Then girl will take bigger portion of the frame and you can display some emotion on her face? And Underbelly not so important(if he fully clothed) and can be not in focus. And when she take off her clothes you can reverse the scene and make it from his point of view by placing camera behind him. I like more position of camera in third picture(black and white). You can turn camera clock-wise even more so second man can enter the frame.
Also the light is not on girl. She is a center of scene, don't you think, but Underbelly is illuminated better than her(on first image).
I called her the "girl" because I cannot recognize who it is - Melanie or Monica(they have the same hair in the game). That is why I proposed position of the camera that make her face more visible.
imho