- Jul 3, 2021
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Much better? The first one is interactive mode and the second in photoreal. Honestly, I prefer photoreal. Much faster and better result. The photoreal took 6 minutes to fully render for a 3080ti 3970X, the interactive took 30 minutes to just render a half of the render. Which one looks better?I like the idea, i like the environment that you chose. The poses. The lightings needs work. I believe that Melanie must be center of lighting, also light must have in-door temperature(right now it is too white). Also even in the second image the second protagonist(the man who trying to take off his pants) is too poorly lit. Try to play with several sources of light in the scene, maybe place lamp above them(some ceiling chandelier), some neon sign on the bar's wall as the source of light. That type of thing.
The angle of camera is ok, but frame is poor. You have five people in the scene and three of them is partially out of frame. Why? Also for Underbelly - we don't event see his face.
There are several errors on Melanie: missing nipples, error in waist bending with new gen, tits that will look better if you squeeze them by legs a little.
That is imho of cause, i am not a pro.
For future works: how about making a story for this image. How Melanie meets with Underbelly, how the things will end after that.