fetishgirl

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Holy fuck that ending was TERRIBLE!


How could they have thought that it people would enjoy an hour of dumb exposition that amounts to "Sure I'm evil but I WAS DOING IT FOR THE RIGHT REASONS! Trust me I felt bad about it Boo hoo" then rendering all of your choices meaningless (Even if you make all the "correct" choices in the game then in the end the main character wakes up just to witness herself dying, great fucking idea Celestial Novel or I guess based on the credit at the very end, it was someone named Dwayne to blame) before revealing that this was mostly a big way to introduce the sequel with some random dude as the main character.
If true that you can't end up with anyone and die this is a terrible ending possibly the worst on this site and that is a high bar to reach. Don't know what is with the games recently having terrible ending for different reasons.
 

Zick_Zack

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It's disappointing to see it change to a male protag for part 2, but hey, all the best to the dev . I guess that's what his paying supporters are asking for. Now, I'm less happy with the ending to this one, it's very disappointing. The Story has been an interesting one, with some nice characters.
Yeah, it's true, it's disappointing but understandable.
I mean, I don't think it's bad that the dev wants to include a male MC, he already explained his reasons and I think it's good, but I would have liked Maeve to at least remain one of the main characters and in this second part to tie up all the loose ends that were left in the air instead of being relegated to just a secondary character and romantic interest of this new protagonist.

But well, that's just one opinion and I repeat that I wish the developer all the best for this second part.
 

Lady Lydia

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Was the ending rushed? I mean I haven't played it in awhile and I lost my saves so I'm going fresh again.
Oh yea its rushed, you can tell due to the fact if you pay attention most relationships were left incomplete in their development, the insane amount of exposition which should absolutely been stretched over a far longer narrative, taking several chapters to fully unveil, all of it show its rushed.

WTF why completed? or is this season 1? just maybe
Its not so much Season 1 as its Dragon Age Origins to what is coming next is Dragon Age 2, forget about the current female MC, a new male MC will take her place and tons of stuff will be left unfinished from this in favor of basically abandoning this story.

If true that you can't end up with anyone and die this is a terrible ending possibly the worst on this site and that is a high bar to reach. Don't know what is with the games recently having terrible ending for different reasons.
Yea forget about any relationships you were building, its all abandoned and skipped in favor of finishing the story, and yea it seem Maive is pretty much gone, this game was done away with so the Dev can move on to his new alpha chad male MC in the sequel.

It's disappointing to see it change to a male protag for part 2, but hey, all the best to the dev . I guess that's what his paying supporters are asking for. Now, I'm less happy with the ending to this one, it's very disappointing. The Story has been an interesting one, with some nice characters.
I doubt its even most of his paying supporters, its probably a small very vocal minority like usual, otherwise why the Hell were so many supporters invested in this story with a female MC if they disliked so much said MC that they needed to push for a male MC instead, so likely its merely the typical small minority that vocally used their paying support to tell the Dev what to do and convince him he'll be making making more money that way.
 
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Lady Lydia

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Yeah, it's true, it's disappointing but understandable.
I mean, I don't think it's bad that the dev wants to include a male MC, he already explained his reasons and I think it's good, but I would have liked Maeve to at least remain one of the main characters and in this second part to tie up all the loose ends that were left in the air instead of being relegated to just a secondary character and romantic interest of this new protagonist.

But well, that's just one opinion and I repeat that I wish the developer all the best for this second part.
The problem is the Dev isn't including a male MC, he is getting rid of the current female MC and abandoned all of the story and relationship development in favor of moving to a new game with a new MC. Also I don't consider 'because I am hoping to make more money' as a good justification for abandoning this game, no matter what the Dev might claim their is no other explanation possible for making such a crappy move.

Like usual a small amount of paying supporters that are merely using the fact they pay to push the Dev into making the game they want, and doubtfully will even still support him when he'll have moved on to his new game to their taste since they'll have achieved their goal and the Dev will lose most of their paying supporters that weren't part of said small group, inevitably causing them to lose virtually all support at the end of the day because they gave in to greed.
 

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Oh yea its rushed, you can tell due to the fact if you pay attention most relationships were left incomplete in their development, the insane amount of exposition which should absolutely been stretched over a far longer narrative, taking several chapters to fully unveil, all of it show its rushed.



Its not so much Season 1 as its Dragon Age Origins to what is coming next is Dragon Age 2, forget about the current female MC, a new male MC will take her place and tons of stuff will be left unfinished from this in favor of basically abandoning this story.



Yea forget about any relationships you were building, its all abandoned and skipped in favor of finishing the story, and yea it seem Maive is pretty much gone, this game was done away with so the Dev can move on to his new alpha chad male MC in the sequel.



I doubt its even most of his paying supporters, its probably a small very vocal minority like usual, otherwise why the Hell were so many supporters invested in this story with a female MC if they disliked so much said MC that they needed to push for a male MC instead, so likely its merely the typical small minority that vocally used their paying support to tell the Dev what to do and convince him he'll be making making more money that way.
Thank you for your reply I won't bother going back to this game and blacklist this dev. It is sad to see so many games I have been enjoying have such bad endings like Mech academy and Monster College but this one is the worst yet.
 

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There are certain choices that require a minimum stat requirement to see an alternate version of the scene.... however since this is the steam version it gives you the choice to bypass the stat requirement (thus "bypass requirement" choice).
Thank you very much. (y) :whistle:
 

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Man what the hell. THAT'S the ending? After the whole mess we get some bullshit and oh no
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and then Maive just gets screwed over no matter what?
I heard that it's been said that she comes back in Part 2 thankfully but holy fuck, after the entire game, after getting railed by like half the town and getting involved in so much shit, it was all for nothing? The MILF got shafted (and not in a good way) so I hope the second part gives her a good ending. This shit was just depressing.
 
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Celestial Novel

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The poor girl tried hard, but her recorded voice was very low compared to the volume of the music or the general ambient sound (when everything is set to the same volume).
Don't set everything in the same volume, if you think the narrator voice is too low, then simply make the volume higher or make the music lower

I personally liked it, but I think that if you make a comparison you could see, at least from the point of view of the graphics, what the problem could be . Another problem would be that there are many characters and they remained undeveloped. These could be some of the reasons why you have mixed reviews on Steam. Do not take this criticism from a negative point of view. View attachment 4539242
Those characters from other games have a good skin that I could not achieve, if anyone here professional at DAZ and understand a way to improve daz character skin I'm willing to listen

Male protagonists are always superior. I wonder what age range he'll be in. Also, when will the new release be on here?
True. College age
can't wait for Devs next game. wish was more content with Blue Hair Daughter. love her the most.
Thanks. She will have a lot of screen time based on my current plan

I haven't played for some updates but what do you mean it's complete? WIll there be a season 2 or smt? I feel like there were too many characters for it to end with only 12 chapter. Is the ending rushed?
Man noooo, I liked this game a lot it's actually sad to see it with the completed tag...



THX
There will be sequel to this game which means this game is not truly
Good to see it complete. This is a decent game, IMO.
I haven't played it in a while, but I will now. Is the dialogue better than when it started? I remember it being kind of off.
it should be way much better because I have a writer now
okay so will male protag be husband or son ? if its going down similar route as the first with incest and all ? im curious to know as well as others unless you are keeping that secret close to your vest and not tell us it just yet ?
Not her husband nor her son, a new character


finished
I guess that's what his paying supporters are asking for.
They never asked for it, I already planned this from the start.
WTF why completed? or is this season 1? just maybe
There will be sequel to this gam
very shitty update,! Maive has only scene with Xander, what about Alfred with Maive and what about Joyce , damn it !!
There are Maive Alfred new Scene and a lot more scenes.
 

Celestial Novel

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Oh yea its rushed, you can tell due to the fact if you pay attention most relationships were left incomplete in their development, the insane amount of exposition which should absolutely been stretched over a far longer narrative, taking several chapters to fully unveil, all of it show its rushed.
Holy fuck that ending was TERRIBLE!
Man what the hell. THAT'S the ending? After the whole mess we get some bullshit and oh no
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and then Maive just gets screwed over no matter what?
I heard that it's been said that she comes back in Part 2 thankfully but holy fuck, after the entire game, after getting railed by like half the town and getting involved in so much shit, it was all for nothing? The MILF got shafted (and not in a good way) so I hope the second part gives her a good ending. This shit was just depressing
Well that ending sucked, it was a massive exposition fest where everything was pretty much just rammed down our collective throats what amount to a mass of backstory that should have been revealed over several chapters rather than in one big dump. Also the ending feel rushed as Hell, the story was advancing at some pace, the MC relationship with her family felt far from fully developed, instead it feel like this entire chapter was basically the Dev having abandoned this game in favor of its sequel because of the belief a male MC will earn the Dev more money, decided to expedite what should have been several chapters worth of exposition while dropping any other character relationship story aside for it.
Like I said many times in the thread, the game is lacking financial support, that's why the ending is rushed. I mean, what can you expect when everyone is complaining like they own the game but they are so poor and can't support the game financially. I'm working here, not doing some kind of charity.


Guess what? If its the year 4k they'd have interstellar travel technology, so if a black hole is coming what do you do? Not travel back in time a couple thousand years to try to fix things, you fucking build spaceships and you leave the planet, something FAR MORE FEASIBLE than time travel, if you say they didn't have the tech for interstellar travel because of the Laws of Physics I'd answer so they shouldn't have time travel either in that case, if one is possible both are possible and if anything space will be far easier to travel than time.
You cleary don't understand that in the game the black hole is consuming "EVERYTHING" which means other planets will be consumed too. Maybe you need to learn the word "Everything" first before making a comment.

Oh and Fourth Dimension bullshit?
Fourth Dimension doesn't really exist in real life that's why I'm free to create anything from it and It is funny you tried to compare fantasy aspect in a FANTASY GAME to a real life. Don't play fantasy genre if you want real life science situation

So yea in conclusion, this ending is garbage, I suppose I'll be one of a number of people that will be abandoning this story and its sequel, just like the Dev decided to abandon us
Abandoning? Lmao the story is continuing and there will be sequel to this game, your comment clearly non-sense.

great fucking idea Celestial Novel or I guess based on the credit at the very end, it was someone named Dwayne to blame)
I'm the one that responsible for the plot of the story, my writer is writing what I told him to do.

it seem Maive is pretty much gone,
Maive will be one of the main lovers in the sequel, stop spreading fake information
I doubt its even most of his paying supporters, its probably a small very vocal minority like usual, otherwise why the Hell were so many supporters invested in this story with a female MC if they disliked so much said MC that they needed to push for a male MC instead, so likely its merely the typical small minority that vocally used their paying support to tell the Dev what to do and convince him he'll be making making more money that way.
I'm laughing at this comment because actually paying customers never talk and never complaining. The small very vocal minority that always complaining is the one that never supports the game. I mean look at this thread, as soon as the game is leaked, people that never support the game coming in and crying about the game lol

Thank you for your reply I won't bother going back to this game and blacklist this dev.
Thanks God, one of the complainers that never support the game leave me, my day will be better :LOL:
 
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