Lewd Heart

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The game looks interesting and i like the title :LOL: , I just want to get rid of a question before the thread get on fire :HideThePain: (maybe it is a typing error or I did not understand correctly) if we choose Alice lesbian does it mean that this path contains Ntr? (because from what I read it seems that it said that the trans route does not have ntr but it leaves me in doubt if lesbian does contain :unsure: )

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No there won't be any ntr with lesbian Alice either. Will change phrasing as what it meant is 'Transgender Alice won't steal any of your girls'.
 
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Lewd Heart

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So after 5 mins of play i recommend slowing the refresh rate of the gifs that you are using aswell as some one to proof read for you. There are things in there that are either not needed or out of order..... As i said befor thank you and keep up the good work!
No, thank YOU. Will work on the issues.
 
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The photoshoped stuff reminds of "Mother's Best Friend".
Anyway, good luck with dat. Looks foward the next updates, need some Kendra Lust or Lisa Ann content.
 

Sleel

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Hey Dev - what use is that changelog? We know its your first release, what we want to know is whats in it...

(and what to do with the patch)

~25 mins of content - its very wordy, I was bored of it and started skipping through i after 20 minutes.

1 blow job scene

Good use of UI, it doesn't feel like renpy.

Has some promise but in its current state there is no hint of how much of a game of this will be. At the moment its completely linear and there are no choices.

Also having one black guy and immediately labelling him a racist is a strong look....
Man. I wonder. Could it possibly function like every other patch in renpy and get dropped into the game folder? I wonder.
 

Lewd Heart

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Sep 27, 2020
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Hey Dev - what use is that changelog? We know its your first release, what we want to know is whats in it...

(and what to do with the patch)

~25 mins of content - its very wordy, I was bored of it and started skipping through i after 20 minutes.

1 blow job scene

Good use of UI, it doesn't feel like renpy.

Has some promise but in its current state there is no hint of how much of a game of this will be. At the moment its completely linear and there are no choices.

Also having one black guy and immediately labelling him a racist is a strong look....
Thank you for the feedback. This will not be like other renpy games with different images for every click. It will mostly a text based game like html games as real pictures that convey the story are hard to find or doesn't exist. Even with this first version a lot of photoshop was used.

What I can do is space out the dialogues and sex scenes so it doesn't feel like a drag and also proofread and focus on the text so that it may convey the story in short, precise manner that is pleasing to read.

I will also change the way 'Brandon' character is addressed at the start. Since mc has another black character 'Vincent' as his best friend it didn't occurred to me that it is not a good thing. But will change it regardless.
 
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but personally I liked the idea of the game, I think develop the game a little, the game will be good. black guy was shown as a racist?) and immediately began some criticism from some people ..., it seems to me f95, not a place for reading morality, etc. why can't a black or Asian be racist?) Well, well, I don't even want to raise this topic, there are enough too sensitive people in the world) and even more so in the Internet space. I liked the list of porn actresses who were chosen in the game)) I will click like the game, and I will follow the updates)
 
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Zabutnik

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If that opening dream is a tease of what is gonna be added in the future, I am looking forward to more of this cause that would be wonderful.
 

JustDJ

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as others have said, this is a ren'py game that uses the engine well. I like what I've seen so far and Bailey Jay as the trans girl is a big plus in my book. personally I prefer more focus on the trans characters and more options, but I can understand in a game mainly about MILFs that the focus would mainly be other characters. definitely keeping this one on the watch list.
 

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wow, from the very beginning this porn story surprises with its non-banality)
black racist,
a black character named Tyrone is not the stereotypical alpha male with a horse dick,
jock named Muhammad,
the main character is not a pussy, but a normal adequate guy, and this despite the fact that it looks like there will be a lot of NTRs in the game. etc

You have my attention.
 

desmosome

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Just started playing. The writing and the plot seems more grounded than what I was expecting from a game called "Fight for MILFs." There are some grammar issues, but it's not grating enough to break immersion.

Now, I don't want to tell you how to make your game, but I think you are being a bit too free with image selection. You see clearly different people acting the part of a single character. The mom turns brunette at one point when she's whispering. Girls get dressed, undressed, dressed again, and even change clothing and hair during a single blowjob. Stuff like this does break immersion. You can't always show consistent pics for all situations, but at least sex scene gifs should be taken from the same batch/video and presented chronologically.

That's my initial impression.
 
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