Lewd Heart

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Just started playing. The writing and the plot seems more grounded than what I was expecting from a game called "Fight for MILFs." There are some grammar issues, but it's not grating enough to break immersion.

Now, I don't want to tell you how to make your game, but I think you are being a bit too free with image selection. You see clearly different people acting the part of a single character. The mom turns brunette at one point when she's whispering. Girls get dressed, undressed, dressed again, and even change clothing and hair during a single blowjob. Stuff like this does break immersion. You can't always show consistent pics for all situations, but at least sex scene gifs should be taken from the same batch/video and presented chronologically.

That's my initial impression.
Thank you for the feedback. Yes it is one of the biggest challenge I have. I wrote the handjob scene of lexi in which she does things in order. First she should grab the player's crotch, then kneel seductively, then she gives a handjob, then she should close her mouth when the player tries for a blowjob, then she receives a facial. All this with the Point of view of the player and that too while he is standing. This was my main focus at that time rather than her clothing.

And I couldn't find exactly what I was looking for. Because I want the player to get aroused by the story and the scene rather than just by watching the clips of nude pornstar in the screen.

Real porn games rely heavily on the players imagination and the pictures are mostly used to convey the scene and to arouse the player. But I do accept the criticism and will try to make the story work around the porn clips I use.
Again Thank you for playing and the feedback!
 

Lewd Heart

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Hello! This is a message from the developer. Unfortunately the next update will take a little longer as many new game mechanics has been implemented with an interactable timetable for all the characters. The coding for the game took longer than expected. But the update will be bigger with more lewd scenes.

The update will introduce several new characters whose models include Lisa ann, Asa akira, Brandi love, Romi rains, Riley Reid. But not to worry the characters are not stuffed just for the sake of it. Many characters will not be interactable unless you progress the story. The story will take priority. The main story, lexi(Abella danger) scenes, jenna(valentina nappi) story will also have a big update.

Again, I apologize for the late update. And thank you for the support and ratings that you have given especially my patreons. I would do my best to give an satisfactory update to justify the time taken.
 
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konabwo

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[vn] sign and This is mostly a Text based game note.
so i assume it will stay a vn with some sbx ui


ui looks good.
tips are clear.
visuals - yeah, there is some inconsistency. (it feels like intentions were good: to give a player more shots and visuals to back up a text. and cannot say it helped)
text/writing - no idea, never-reader here.

but if it ends up as a classic sandox ... my usual concern will be a wasted energy on unnecessary elements -like text (as sandboxes players rarely read) and routes (which defacto shorten your game)
 
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rickbrook

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Gregory, I do not think this game is going to be updated anymore. I am sorry to say this, superstar
dev said in his post that the game "will not be dropped" and that he's trying to push the update before Feb. I guess the latter part wont be possible but i have high hopes for this one.
I love the premise and the execution, the framework is good enough.
dev has to just keep going with the story and the content.
 
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jetama

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dev said in his post that the game "will not be dropped" and that he's trying to push the update before Feb. I guess the latter part wont be possible but i have high hopes for this one.
I love the premise and the execution, the framework is good enough.
dev has to just keep going with the story and the content.
lol feb's almost over
 

cariadult

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Dang, It seems there will be no scene 3some between Lexi and ms Jones. Why? coz i cannot find any 3some videos of Abela Danger and Ava addams which LH can convert to gif :cry:
 

somebodynobody

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My main criticisms are that it is much more a kinetic novel than a game as of now. I think only the arrow mini-game was anything the player could actually do outside of moving.

Needs a fluent speaker to give the text a look over. Most of it is fine, but some errors exist.

I think my other biggest complaint is no separation of who is talking outside of color. Sometimes it just feels a bit cluttered.

I also think the name is a bit off, being so far at least half of the women are non-milf category. Sure, there may be MILFS in it, but I don't see how it can be about them with such a split. Maybe instead of MILFS, it should be Harem.
 
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cooperdk

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Lewd Heart

I generally (as a sign of good faith) warn any developers who use real porn in their games. I am a member of XBIZ and am aware of what the porn industry likes and doesn't like.

Since you have registered your game on Patreon, I want to make you aware of the risk you're putting yourself in.

We have a struggling porn industry, and "borrowing" material without consent is frowned upon. The owners may very well be relentless and might drag you to court for a compensation. They may also file a fraud complaint, as you are aiming to make money from their material.

For your information: I am Danish, and my former co-producer had six photos "borrowed" by a user on a website. The website took down the post, but not the photos which were still available.
The compensation (including a file for breaking the criminal code) was $1,000 per photo to be paid by both the user and the site administrator/owner.

That is, $1000 * 2 persons * six photos. The compensation was $12,000 for SIX photos. In Denmark where the compensation is not inflated.
In the USA, you might be looking at a million dollar compensation. And that is PER COMPANY.

I'm as mentioned a member of XBIZ, and I am telling you this because they ARE aware of games using their content without permission. I don't know which games they're talking about, but they really do NOT like people using their stuff for financial gain without permission or license.

Also: Patreon will be required to hand over your personal details for identification. And they do. They also freeze all assets you have made when they find out that you're using copyrighted photos and/or videos. It states very explicitly on their terms page that they do so.

It is generally not very smart to use other people's/companies' copyrighted material in games that you hope to make money on.
And this game could easily be made in DAZ or something similar without losing any value.

Other than that, I wish your luck with your project. I am not doing anything about this, not telling anybody or anything, I would just hate to see people caught in something they don't realize is very risky and also very, very expensive.


Before anyone howl about this being a piracy site: no, it is not. This is a site to promote adult games containing sex. Not specifically a game for pirated games. Also, there's a vast difference between software piracy and making money on other people's stuff. One is a specific legal rule, the other is a crime.
 
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