I gave it a spin and I don't think its for me. First impressions are important and there was just nothing here. Its very short, 300ish renders or so and about 10-20 mins depending on reading speed. I just don't think that's enough to really capture anyone's attention in a serious way. That's not the only issue i had to be honest.
The biggest issue is the renders. Frankly there just off. It seems like way way too much Photoshop and effects being added. Some are way to bright and some are super blurry and for me personally it was extremely off putting. Every character has an unnatural shine is the best way to describe it. There is also the weirdness with your teammates aka the quadruplets. The all had the same face(and the weird shine) which was very immersion breaking. The mc also didn't escape he looks incredibly effeminate and looks like he's wearing mascara and lip gloss. I think overall this is going to be a hard sell for a lot of people.