VN Ren'Py Forbidden Passion [v0.11.0 Premium] [PPanGames]

[michael1984]

The game itself is pretty decent

Models look nice as well

But for a 0.2 it feels more like a 0.1 version content wise

Other then that its quite enjoyable for the amount of gameplay it has

 

[Max1276]

PornPan amazing game ,hot girls and interetesting storyline ,jus a little too short update can't wait for what's will happen next ,good job

 

[somedude321]

Memo to the dev on blue-balling, early sex, etc.. My experience on this forum is that you can't please everyone. Tits are too big, tits aren't big enough, NTR no NTR, pregnancy no preg, blah blah blah. Truth is if you blue ball at times, you'll get slammed for blue balling from the neanderthal "gimme MY porn NOW" pervs, and if you throw in a generic (or even meaningless) sex scene, you'll have the more cultured "story" type pervs jacking you up for ruining the story arc(s) w/forced and indiscriminate sex. It's our nature to complain and some of us are just more annoying at it than others.

My advice. Read and absorb the comments and apply as you see fit. But make the game YOU want to make because if it's basically good, meaning chicks are hot (and yours are!), renders and animation doesn't suck, it works technically w/few or minimal bugs, your game will find a plentiful audience and the critical dross will fade away. Great game thus far and good luck. I look forward to the updates!

Straight up!

People will also ask to add optional things as if they don't cost you a lot of extra time to make and add and keep in the story.

I personally prefer build-up in my adult games, it's why I play them. If I didn't I would just be going on video streaming sites and watch that.

I'd probably do 5$ increments on the Patreon though, don't think I've ever seen jumps like yours on other Patreons.

 

[oidex]

Dis some gud shit right there.
And the the dev seems to have a healthy attitude towards realism in porn games, i.e. fuck it.
This is going on my watch list for sure.

 

[Zed]

This looks great so far! I've also got a lot of respect for the creator being open about making the game THEY want. Doesn't hurt that we share the same tastes... As someone who hates feet and cuck stuff, I am 100% on board

 

[somedude321]

Oh and you might want to look into making it game + separate incest patch, otherwise you will likely get in trouble with Patreon.

 

[Zenithtb]

Just my little errors comment;


'Paid'


'...anywhere else to live'



Needs a comma after 'worry'.


A comma after 'No' would be better.


Better would be 'Please answer' or 'Please pick up'.



'café'...?


Missing 'I' after 'why'.

'Tomorrow'.


'You were...'.


'Make' not 'makes'. A person makes, people make.


With that mother and aunt*, stop thinking Patreon and start thinking OnlyFans. *Later: and sister.


'Get'.


'Admirers'.


'Pitch dark' or 'Pitch dark night / sky'.


Should be 'There're' but some people don't say that any more, so up to you.


'Got' = 'Have', unless it's a dialect thing?


'Cigarettes'.


'Did'.


'Whose'.


'You never take me home with you' would be more natural.


Not wrong, exactly, but 'Still no people' would sound better.


'Let's'.


'is she?'.


'Made a stop' = 'stopped'?


'Each other' - with a space.


'All out'.


'Heart attack'.


'Should I get Grandma here faster' or 'Should I get your Grandma here faster'. Though I suspect she knows who his Grandma is


This just sounds clunky. Maybe "and some money has been left in your pockets"?


'Milden' is, in fact, a word. TIL. However I would suggest 'reduce' due to the former's lack of widespread usage.


'At' = 'In'.


My guess would be 'bunkered' = 'Stored'?


'Put' = 'Pose'.


Taking a wild guess here - 'Dedicated'?


'Good looking' with a space.



'In front' - with a space.


Again, and also the second comma should be removed.


'Intensely'.


Although not incorrect, I think using 'don't' would sound better.


'Come by my house'?

OK - TIRED - STOPPING FOR THE NIGHT!

--
Also I note that some words are spelt British, and then the same word will be in American English (i.e. 'harbor' then 'harbour').
Also I suspect where you write 'Wew' would normally be spelt 'Phew'.
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Also, whatever I pick up on, author, let it be known yours is the cleanest writing I've gone through and you should be proud. I only started because the errors started early, and I hate the 'paid vs payed' error lol! Really, well done so far - I just may have to stop

 

[PPanGames]

Just my little errors comment;

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'Paid'

 

[Xenoga'me]

I love big boobs
But i can't find them in real world

 

[Zenithtb]

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Ha, don't worry about it. It's just something I do as I go along* (so my original comment will keep getting expanded, I won't be adding more comments). Some creators find it helpful, so errors get fixed. If you don't like it, feel free to ignore it.

*Until I get bored...

 

[PPanGames]

Ha, don't worry about it. It's just something I do as I go along* (so my original comment will keep getting expanded, I won't be adding more comments). Some creators find it helpful, so errors get fixed. If you don't like it, feel free to ignore it.

*Until I get bored...

I don't mind at all. If you got more, you'd do me a huge favor. Put it in a text document or something and I'll look over my script.

 

[Zenithtb]

I don't mind at all. If you got more, you'd do me a huge favor. Put it in a text document or something and I'll look over my script.

Hm, that sounds too much like like work The way I'm doing it now take me a couple of seconds - your way would make me type stuff lol!

 

[Truvelo]

The game is new but definitely good. Well-written dialogues, nice-looking characters and the overall game looks very good visually, well good job dev

 

[rev2020]

whats wrong with this game?
just read the first review
1.2Gb but no fucking content except dream scenes

that sounds crazy

probably PNG images all over.
change those to JPG and you are down to 200-300mb instead with no quality loss.
PNG should be banned for games

 

[Truvelo]

whats wrong with this game?
just read the first review
1.2Gb but no fucking content except dream scenes

that sounds crazy

probably PNG images all over.
change those to JPG and you are down to 200-300mb instead with no quality loss.
PNG should be banned for games

some games have 9GB and no one is bothered by that. If you have weak internet, change the provider and it's probably logical that changing PNG to JPG will lower the quality so the game won't look as good as it does now...

 

[rev2020]

and it's probably logical that changing PNG to JPG will lower the quality so the game won't look as good as it does now...

LOOL

 

[Truvelo]

LOOL

just emoji? you can't even answer? well, you can see you don't even know what you're writing about lmao

 

[Truvelo]

whats wrong with this game?
just read the first review
1.2Gb but no fucking content except dream scenes

that sounds crazy

probably PNG images all over.
change those to JPG and you are down to 200-300mb instead with no quality loss.
PNG should be banned for games

learn to read and go to the developer's profile on Patreon, then you will find out what is included in the update, unless you are a lazy

 

[Weasel_Face]

Wizard Woman, Karate Champ Tina, T-Rex... WTF??? Looks like a patch really is needed...

 

[AER201812]

Is incest avoidable?

Buhahahaha theres a game for you there you can avoid incest... Mario Brothers LOL The new version is coming out, you should play it
You wanna avoid incest in a game about incest????? are you okay???????