VN Ren'Py Forbidden Passion [v0.12.0 Premium] [PPanGames]

[whichone]

Just my little errors comment;
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'Got' = 'Have', unless it's an dialect thing?

*Or change "don't even" to "haven't" & retain "got".
"A dialect", not "an".

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'Full out'.

*AFAIK "Full out" is not a commonly used expression. It's not familiar to me anyway, as an Englishman. "All out" or "full on" are more natural terms.

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'Come by my house'?

*Also remove first "about". "We can discuss how we go about...", instead of "We can discus about how we go about"

 

[BTLD]

is interaction with all female characters avoidable

I think he should better ask himself if he should play this game at all ..at this point.

 

[The ArcKnight]

Okay so first off, I REALLY like this game! The renders are beautiful, the models are gorgeous and having an impregnation fetish... playing as a supernaturally potent MC with a harem of gorgeous women is right up my alley!

I will say you really have to kill the "Dream sequences" I get it you wanted to include sex but not jump the gun with the main girls, but if you have to, just introduce a side character for an easy lay, the dream sequences are just blue balling.

Love where this is headed, cant wait to see more! (And SO GLAD this wont have any cuck/ntr in it.)
Seriously though, good work with the models, some of the most beautiful girls I've seen in a game.

 

[PPanGames]

is interaction with all female characters avoidable

 

[Zenithtb]

"A dialect", not "an".

I think I intended to say something else, changed to 'dialect' but didn't change the rest of the sentence. Also it was 3:30am, I was tired and had 'had a couple'.

Think I did alright, considering!

 

[Cowboy Bebop]

Nobody:
NTR fans: This game needs sharing.

I like the game actually sure it might not be everyone's cup of tea but it is what it is. Good luck Pornpan.

 

[lollmaolol123]

i don't think the mac version works. There is no game icon to click on to launch the game. There's only a contents folder in it.

 

[Spirit Detective]

Devs should do what makes them happy ultimately, I like the characters. Make only thing is I get nervous when Devs have multiple projects going on at once. Best of luck to you and your project.

 

[clatuvac]

cisney is my favourity girl

 

[Deleted member 3036029]

Can I titfuck Aunt Tifa yet?

 

[io]

PornPan Version 0.3 "Forbidden Passion" on patreon is ready?

 

[PPanGames]

PornPan Version 0.3 "Forbidden Passion" on patreon is ready?

No. That will take a while. I just released this version.

 

[io]

No. That will take a while. I just released this version.

The beginning gives hope for a juicy sequel, especially male dom. gradma) good luck, I'll start tracking you later in patreon)

 

[saitama88]

Look will be delicious game

 

[sharpys]

I know you like using the Tifa model but it's overdone imo; I'd do a complete makeover of Tina down the line when things start getting serious. The "MC is pathetic" trope is also another overdone item that needs to under go a format later on too. Folks are probably thinking the MC left for dead in the middle of the desert means the end of this oneshot, but if you can use that as a midpoint instead to let the MC rebound and allow character building from that point, I believe you'll go places with this VN.

That's all I have to critique at this stage.

Edit:
Good Lord that sudden coma is such a plot copout.

 

[Daloza]

Sep 12, 2020 Changelog: Nov 11, 2020 N/A 2 month - Bad signal.

 

[Belnick]

maybe it is just me, but I always feel it is such a waste to have dream animations in the games as I always skips them, same in porn, if a girl touch her self and then dream of a fucking, i just go meeh, next....
I get the story cant move too fast and perhaps the dreams is a way of showing the potential of the game later on, but just bugs me i guess

 

[Qmil679]

Is there actual sex in this game? or only in a dream?

 

[caxhub]

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[darth_hiruma]

Is there actual sex in this game? or only in a dream?

Only in a dream and a handjob irl for now.