Fra_Seorn
Is there a particular reason why you choose Unity and not Ren'Py? Are you more familiar with C# than Python?
Unity has its pros and cons and if you don't want to add any "impressive" features, minigames etc. or you are not familiar with coding Unity can turn into a real pain in the ass for both sides, player's and developer's. (I'm a Unity enthusiast and active in many Unity threads, trying to help people, who have problems to run these games).
If you want to continue with Unity please keep in mind that animation using MPEG-4 (h.264/265/266) codec need Windows Media Foundation to decode. That might cause an issue for a future Android port or proper Unix ports. To avoid that problem many Unity-game devs switch over to VP8 codec (VP9 isn't supported by Unity yet) in webm container.
About the game:
- not sure if it is a poor skin texture or the light that makes the skin look like from a zombie movie...
- the game also works, if MC would be the daughter and not the father. So, a daughter trying to apologize and fixing her relationship with her father. By doing that she finds out that her father starts to lust after her.