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I had to change my plans a bit in the development of the story, but I think what I have adopted is the best solution. Unfortunately I could not edit Emma's images from the previous version, so there will be a bit of a difference between the Emma of version 1 and that of version 2, but not too much, since the skin is always the same, but with a lower translucency. As usual, I look forward to your comments, suggestions and anything else that can help me improve. Thanks and have fun.
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I had to change my plans a bit in the development of the story, but I think what I have adopted is the best solution. Unfortunately I could not edit Emma's images from the previous version, so there will be a bit of a difference between the Emma of version 1 and that of version 2, but not too much, since the skin is always the same, but with a lower translucency. As usual, I look forward to your comments, suggestions and anything else that can help me improve. Thanks and have fun.
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you know the first time i played the game i had a few issues with it.
like not being able to stop the old guy from looking up her skirt.
although i still wish we could do that. im more curious what kind of content is planned? cant deny knocking the girls up seems like fun. but i can exhibitionism seems to be there to. and although its not my thing its not a deal breaker.
also does the daughter's boyfriend have a woman in his life MC can bang? a sister or something gotta get that payback you know?
but yeah nice update.
like not being able to stop the old guy from looking up her skirt.
although i still wish we could do that. im more curious what kind of content is planned? cant deny knocking the girls up seems like fun. but i can exhibitionism seems to be there to. and although its not my thing its not a deal breaker.
also does the daughter's boyfriend have a woman in his life MC can bang? a sister or something gotta get that payback you know?
but yeah nice update.
- Jan 5, 2021
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thats great ...now u r talking ..and u give me a hop in this game ..im happy for improving the game and the grafic characters ..but i will have the keep ver 1 if theres change ..atleast untel i check first the defrences ..other wise ..u the maaaan thank u soo much
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Just played this and, well, this needs some work. I understand that this is the devs first game so I'll try and be less of my normal self here and turn the asshole levels down from eleven...
1) Allowing players to choose the relationship the MC has to Emma is great in theory however it doesn't work when Sara is introduced. If Emma is the MC's daughter then that could possibly make Sara his daughter as well yet she doesn't have a clue who the MC is and Emma refers to Sara as her "little sister" and doesn't mention any familial relationship between the MC and Sara or MC and Emma. The ability to choose Emma's relationship should be expanded to having the player choose what he calls her AND what Emma calls him. So the player can input "Daughter/Daddy" or "Niece/Uncle", this would allow for better immersion. In addition where was the MC's wife or partner through this? Is she dead? Were they never together? More backstory would help make the MC and the characters feel more "realistic" and less like porn dolls.
2) The graphics look great but the women have the same body shape/type - giant tits and asses (at least Emma and Paola). Not going to impose my own desires onto the dev but variety is the spice of life. Emma's eyes are a little freaky, I admit...
3) I understand that the whole point is for the MC to perv on Emma but she goes from 0 to 60 awfully quickly after 12 years of no contact because he fucked her friend. She acts like she's the town bicycle and not everyone wants to ride something that is so well used. The way she acts with her older neighbor (Mr Gray?), the way she is so forward with the MC, the lack of underwear under such a skimpy dress, etc.
4) A slower pace would make sense considering the possible taboo nature of the relationship AND the length of the separation but even Paola (?) throws that and a husband aside so she can fuck the MC. Considering the reason the MC had no relationship with Emma was the fact that he fucked Paola why would he now repeat the same mistake with a married version of his "daughter's" best friend?
5) Overall I think the game has promise though I hate Unity as an engine and feel that Ren'Py would be a better solution but that is a personal preference. As I understand it Unity is one of the more difficult engines for VN and Ren'Py is the easiest or one of the easiest which is why so many new devs use it.
Regardless, I hope the developer continues as long as they enjoy doing it and that I wasn't too horrible in my grouchiness here. Best of luck with your project!
1) Allowing players to choose the relationship the MC has to Emma is great in theory however it doesn't work when Sara is introduced. If Emma is the MC's daughter then that could possibly make Sara his daughter as well yet she doesn't have a clue who the MC is and Emma refers to Sara as her "little sister" and doesn't mention any familial relationship between the MC and Sara or MC and Emma. The ability to choose Emma's relationship should be expanded to having the player choose what he calls her AND what Emma calls him. So the player can input "Daughter/Daddy" or "Niece/Uncle", this would allow for better immersion. In addition where was the MC's wife or partner through this? Is she dead? Were they never together? More backstory would help make the MC and the characters feel more "realistic" and less like porn dolls.
2) The graphics look great but the women have the same body shape/type - giant tits and asses (at least Emma and Paola). Not going to impose my own desires onto the dev but variety is the spice of life. Emma's eyes are a little freaky, I admit...
3) I understand that the whole point is for the MC to perv on Emma but she goes from 0 to 60 awfully quickly after 12 years of no contact because he fucked her friend. She acts like she's the town bicycle and not everyone wants to ride something that is so well used. The way she acts with her older neighbor (Mr Gray?), the way she is so forward with the MC, the lack of underwear under such a skimpy dress, etc.
4) A slower pace would make sense considering the possible taboo nature of the relationship AND the length of the separation but even Paola (?) throws that and a husband aside so she can fuck the MC. Considering the reason the MC had no relationship with Emma was the fact that he fucked Paola why would he now repeat the same mistake with a married version of his "daughter's" best friend?
5) Overall I think the game has promise though I hate Unity as an engine and feel that Ren'Py would be a better solution but that is a personal preference. As I understand it Unity is one of the more difficult engines for VN and Ren'Py is the easiest or one of the easiest which is why so many new devs use it.
Regardless, I hope the developer continues as long as they enjoy doing it and that I wasn't too horrible in my grouchiness here. Best of luck with your project!
hi guys, stupid(maybe, hope not...) question:
how to change the display on which this game runs?
Some, more user-friendly games, have this option when started but some, especially newer games, not.
how to change the display on which this game runs?
Some, more user-friendly games, have this option when started but some, especially newer games, not.
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I think that the MC and Emma's mother are divorced so I say that Sara is a daughter from a new relationship, but I agree with the rest of your post.
I said it before but here is it again for a Unity game it almost plays like a Ren'py game but I will not continue to play the game because as I said in my first post about the game the daughter comes across as a slut and the whole story is dumb in my opinion I mean she walked in on two adults having sex and it may be understandable that she upset that her dad fucked her friend but ignoring him for 12 years is an overreaction. Also not only am I not a fan of the general look of the girls but 2 of them are already cheating on their partners with each other and that is something that I don't like and because of that I'm not interested in Emma or Paola.
A bit more on the technical side of the game, most renders are good and you managed to implement Ren'Py like rollback and save features but the settings of the window are a bit lacking.
That's understandable but it would be nice if there was some basic introduction between the MC and Sara that stated "this is my dad, mom's former husband, MC" or something of that nature.
Yeah, I don't understand making a basic VN style game in the Unity engine. There's a lot you can do with it but if the dev isn't familiar or comfortable it would make more sense to just use Ren'Py like everyone else does.
The daughter being such a basic slut is truthfully the biggest problem with the game, if the dev just wants to make daddy/daughter animated porn then they should go for it. But if they want to make a game they should take the whole story much slower and have the characters slowly build up to it. If everyone just hops on pops dick within the first 4 updates then there is barely any story or game.
If she went to the overreaction to not talk to her dad for 12 years because he fucked her friend how is he so willing to just jump back into her life? Why is she so happy to see him? And why is she trying so hard to fuck him? It makes no sense except porn sense. Which, once again I have to say, if that is what the dev wants then they are succeeding.
I am also not a fan of cheating, either the MC cheating or the LI cheating. It hurts my logical brain when the LI just reunited with the MC and, without asking anything of his love life, try to fuck him. I guess we're all supposed to think "fuckable meat must be fucked" or something equally primitive. It's fine for most people I like more in my stories. I am that fucking weird guy who does no sex runs of games just to see if devs can tell a good story without sex (like Hollywood in the 1940's, LOL).
I think a better synopsis would be this:
The daughter that you never knew lusted for your dick, catches you plowing her best friend. Enraged, she walks out of your life not before forgiving her best friend and the dude who looked at her wrong. Twelve years later, after a cock hopping adventure around the city and nowhere to turn for help she returns home. She will repay you with worn-out twat.
There fixed it for you.
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Hope it illustrates the plot better.
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I just started playing. Wow, it's start out really fucked up, but in a very good way. hahah. Nice!
1. I was going to recommend you use G8.1F skin shader, but you beat me to it! I strongly recommend you stick with Genesis 8.1F skin shader, that looks much better.
2. The thicc aspect of the girls is awesome. Not too thicc, but just the perfect amount.
3. Both the daughter and paola are sexy as hell, good job.
4. The exhibition angle is FANTASTIC. She loves to show off with no panties, that's so hot.
5. The subtle NTR is AMAZING. Add as much NTR as you possibly can. Hopefully we can see her get FUCKED BY EVERYONE! But ultimately, follow how you feel! (If you love NTR, add as much as you can!) lol, imagine her dad parading his daughter around, then pimping her and watching her get fucked, how fucked up with that be. Or her boss takes her to a big party to celebrate her movie, but all the head honchos fuck her right in front of you, while congratulating you on her success, then of course you have the option to fuck her too or just watch!
*after casually suggesting a daughter gangbang orgy......*
6. Oh, and download AUDACITY and normalize all the audio files, so their volumes are all the same, then can be brought up or down in volume in game.
7. Make sure your monitor is calibrated, that way the contrast & saturation you see on your monitor will be very much the same as what others see on their calibrated monitors.
8. I found the Unity interface to be very intuitive. IMO, since you went with this route, stick with Unity. I agree with others that Ren'py is a good choice, but you've already put so much effort into Unity, stick with it.
9. Her little sister seemed kind of boring. I would recommend trying to RESIST the urge to add too many women. Still, you need at least one younger girl arond 20ish, so I understand why you added her. Other guys will probably really like that.
1. I was going to recommend you use G8.1F skin shader, but you beat me to it! I strongly recommend you stick with Genesis 8.1F skin shader, that looks much better.
2. The thicc aspect of the girls is awesome. Not too thicc, but just the perfect amount.
3. Both the daughter and paola are sexy as hell, good job.
4. The exhibition angle is FANTASTIC. She loves to show off with no panties, that's so hot.
5. The subtle NTR is AMAZING. Add as much NTR as you possibly can. Hopefully we can see her get FUCKED BY EVERYONE! But ultimately, follow how you feel! (If you love NTR, add as much as you can!) lol, imagine her dad parading his daughter around, then pimping her and watching her get fucked, how fucked up with that be. Or her boss takes her to a big party to celebrate her movie, but all the head honchos fuck her right in front of you, while congratulating you on her success, then of course you have the option to fuck her too or just watch!
*after casually suggesting a daughter gangbang orgy......*
6. Oh, and download AUDACITY and normalize all the audio files, so their volumes are all the same, then can be brought up or down in volume in game.
7. Make sure your monitor is calibrated, that way the contrast & saturation you see on your monitor will be very much the same as what others see on their calibrated monitors.
8. I found the Unity interface to be very intuitive. IMO, since you went with this route, stick with Unity. I agree with others that Ren'py is a good choice, but you've already put so much effort into Unity, stick with it.
9. Her little sister seemed kind of boring. I would recommend trying to RESIST the urge to add too many women. Still, you need at least one younger girl arond 20ish, so I understand why you added her. Other guys will probably really like that.
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ooh! .. I like that we have the option to change the status of the person.. that'll give the game more replay value
Plus I like that the Dev is making this from his pleasure rather than being a Patreon abuser, cash-grabber, content paid and added by public choice.
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I'll keep my eye on this one.
Plus I like that the Dev is making this from his pleasure rather than being a Patreon abuser, cash-grabber, content paid and added by public choice.
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I'll keep my eye on this one.
Shit, I was going to ask what is wrong with you, then I read your signature and realized you are some evil MOFO
. Although I see your point, she does give some cock hopping whore vibes, I think it is just for the exhibitionist kink.