VN Ren'Py Abandoned Forgive [v0.02 Update 3] [FraGames]

[hakarlman]

Shit, I was going to ask what is wrong with you, then I read your signature and realized you are some evil MOFO . Although I see your point, she does give some cock hopping whore vibes, I think it is just for the exhibitionist kink.

The Non-NTR is very well done. I would be fine just having the MC make out with the daughter 24/7, publicly in different places. The whole game could just be "make out with daughter in public in various places", and I would be totally happy lol. So if he doesn't add NTR, that'd be cool too.

Just curious, do you like or hate the exhibition parts? Would you rather keep her covered up more, have her wear panties, stop flashing people, etc?

 

[v1900]

The Non-NTR is very well done. I would be fine just making out with the daughter 24/7, publicly in different places. The whole game could just be "make out with daughter in public in various places", and I would be totally happy lol. So if he doesn't add NTR, that'd be cool too.

Just curious, do you like or hate the exhibition parts? Would you rather keep her covered up more, or have her wear panties, and stop flashing people?

She should let those lips flap freely for the world to see, better if they are munching on mayo.

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I am all for fucked up kinks except NTR that shit hits too close.

 

[hamod]

I just started playing. Wow, it's start out really fucked up, but in a very good way. hahah. Nice!

1. I was going to recommend you use G8.1F skin shader, but you beat me to it! I strongly recommend you stick with Genesis 8.1F skin shader, that looks much better.

2. The thicc aspect of the girls is awesome. Not too thicc, but just the perfect amount.

3. Both the daughter and paola are sexy as hell, good job.

4. The exhibition angle is FANTASTIC. She loves to show off with no panties, that's so hot.

5. The subtle NTR is AMAZING. Add as much NTR as you possibly can. Hopefully we can see her get FUCKED BY EVERYONE! But ultimately, follow how you feel! (If you love NTR, add as much as you can!) lol, imagine her dad parading his daughter around, then pimping her and watching her get fucked, how fucked up with that be. Or her boss takes her to a big party to celebrate her movie, but all the head honchos fuck her right in front of you, while congratulating you on her success, then of course you have the option to fuck her too or just watch!

6. Download AUDACITY and normalize all the audio files, so their volumes are all the same, then can be brought up or down in game.

7. Make sure your monitor is calibrated, that way the contrast & saturation you see on your monitor will be very much the same as what others see on their calibrated monitors.

8. I found the Unity interface to be very intuitive. IMO, since you went with this route, stick with Unity. I agree with others that Ren'py is a good choice, but you've already put so much effort into Unity, stick with it.

9. Her little sister seemed kind of boring. I would recommend trying to RESIST the urge to add too many women. Still, you need at least one younger girl arond 20ish, so I understand why you added her. Other guys will probably really like that.

5- NTR wise

u mean or u have to say if u dont have any feeling u can put as more NTR as u can ..thats the correct word ..becouse if he realy have smale feeling or sense he will not even put NTR in the game knowing that it will hurt and broke too much players heart in there .. and ruin the game

but the question is ..is there any NTR in the new ver ? ..becouse i didnt play it yet ...i know that ver 1 was fine .. no monkey besiness

 

[v1900]

5- NTR wise

u mean or u have to say if u dont have any feeling u can put as more NTR as u can ..thats the correct word ..becouse if he realy have smale feeling or sense he will not even put NTR in the game knowing that it will hurt and broke too much players heart in there .. and ruin the game

but the question is ..is there any NTR in the vew ver ..becouse i didnt play it yet ...i know that ver 1 was fine .. no monkey besiness

There is no NTR but she lets anyone get handsy (the old neighbor did get a good hand full) even in front of the MC and she appears to be promiscuous going by the laptop videos.

 

[hamod]

There is no NTR but she lets anyone get handsy (the old neighbor did get a good hand full) even in front of the MC and she appears to be promiscuous going by the laptop videos.

if its only hand job scene NTR i will try to handle that .. but if its gonna go deep im gonna start to pushing this game in the dark list of games insted of loving it as my favorit ..and this is not gonna be good ..realy ...if i hated a game im gonna put it downnnn

 

[v1900]

if its only hand job scene NTR i will try to handle that .. but if its gonna go deep im gonna start to pushing this game in the dark list of games insted of loving it as my favorit ..and this is not gonna be good ..realy ...if i hated a game im gonna put it downnnn

I gave you the wrong impression, what I meant was that the neighbor grabs her ass when he greets her (she is teasing the MC) and she immediately turns around and starts making out with the MC (who she already introduced as her father). As MrFriendly already pointed out its porn logic.

 

[hakarlman]

It's been months since I supported a game on Patreon. I finally awnt to support ag ame on patreon, and he doesn't have a patreon.

I gave you the wrong impression, what I meant was that the neighbor grabs her ass when he greets her (she is teasing the MC) and she immediately turns around and starts making out with the MC (who she already introduced as her father). As MrFriendly already pointed out its porn logic.

Are you talking about the old man by the elevator? You're saying he grabs her ass, but she immediately turns around and

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[v1900]

It's been months since I supported a game on Patreon. I finally awnt to support ag ame on patreon, and he doesn't have a patreon.


Are you talking about the old man by the elevator? You're saying he grabs her ass, but she immediately turns around and

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Yes it is the elevator scene, the MC does not use tongue but she does and the MC is grabbing her ass.

Hug tighter > kiss her > open mouth > put your hands on her ass > don't use tongue.

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Again porn logic, she can use tongue but you can not because it becomes inappropriate.

 

[TSL_JOK4R.]

is there goinna be an android port ?

 

[Booki]

The sister, Sara, has some weird textures. Her nipples clip thru the dress in different positions and then she also has weird black ovals above her eyebrows. It's right when you are introduced to her so it's very noticeable too.

 

[madrid3423]

While renders are top notch, dialog seems to be awkward and some rewrite could do wonders for this game.

 

[crisbr]

honestly i loved this game wow i was very excited from the beginning until the end of it i loved everything mainly the exhibitionist part and the one she likes to show this is wonderful

 

[msleomac]

Looking forward to playing this game. Just out of curiosity. If the game is intended to be pure VN (Totally approve by the way), wouldn't it be better to use the Renpy engine to create the game? I felt it was smoother than Unity. If dev is on this thread like to hear his thoughts and those of other gamers.

 

[benyaminlorit]

Great start. A tad short but it did what it needed to do and set it up quite nicely. Hopefully, the update cycles aren't too long if the average episode lengths are like this. Will be keeping an eye on this for sure.

 

[hamod]

I gave you the wrong impression, what I meant was that the neighbor grabs her ass when he greets her (she is teasing the MC) and she immediately turns around and starts making out with the MC (who she already introduced as her father). As MrFriendly already pointed out its porn logic.

yea but if the make out was with the mc and the bastard neighbor he only grabe her ass forced ..then i can take that as story line thing ill give it a pass ...u see this is porn game .. so i have to be ready for this kind of scenes i was sure theres more grabs will happend .. even if i like it or not .. ill not be strick in ever small things even im ntr hater im more looking to injoy the game not to find mistakes .. but i apreciate ur explane u made me feel better now i realy liked this game

 

[LWtbo]

Not saying this is what happened because I haven't tried the game yet but it's been mentioned a couple of time's but from looking at this and if there no frames been missed that is.

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The thing that seems off about that is She is huging him while he grabs her ass now I'm no expert but thats defiatly not normal.
Especialy when its being described as a just a grope.
When it's clearly more than just a grope its blatantly obvious that since she is still hugging him its more than a grope.
She is definitely enjoying it that is untill she apparently remembers you the MC is there.
You can literally almost see the cogs turning in her head she obviously dosn't really care but at the same time she also realizes she needs to make a show of it by making out with you as a distraction.

Now you can say she's and exhibitionist and a flirt and that was just harmles fun if you want.
But thats not what it looks like she looks like the type of woman that would agree to having a gangbang in the other room if she thought there was a chance you wouldn't figger it out.

Atleast thats what I see from these pictures.
I have met woman in my time that act exactly like that so even if my ganbang sujestion is a little exagerated the likly hood she would cheat at the drop of a hat isn't.

fortunatly thats only my opinion and maybe thats not what the Dev was aiming for or the direction he/she is planning to go with it I don't know.


Just Sayin.

 

[hamod]

Not saying this is what happened because I haven't tried the game yet but it's been mentioned a couple of time's but from looking at this and if there no frames been missed that is.

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The thing that seems off about that is She is huging him while he grabs her ass now I'm no expert but thats defiatly not normal.
Especialy when its being described as a just a grope.
When it's clearly more than just a grope its blatantly obvious that since she is still hugging him its more than a grope.
She is definitely enjoying it that is untill she apparently remembers you the MC is there.
You can literally almost see the cogs turning in her head she obviously dosn't really care but at the same time she also realizes she needs to make a show of it by making out with you as a distraction.

Now you can say she's and exhibitionist and a flirt and that was just harmles fun if you want.
But thats not what it looks like she looks like the type of woman that would agree to having a gangbang in the other room if she thought there was a chance you wouldn't figger it out.

Atleast thats what I see from these pictures.
I have met woman in my time that act exactly like that so even if my ganbang sujestion is a little exagerated the likly hood she would cheat at the drop of a hat isn't.

fortunatly thats only my opinion and maybe thats not what the Dev was aiming for or the direction he/she is planning to go with it I don't know.


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ok ..now ( what the hell was this pics ) i didnt reach that part in ver 1 but is this gonna be in ver 2 ? ohh maan come on why the hell is the mc allowing this ? OK .. this is bad ..

is my MC is a pimp or something cuckold ?

ahh what a turn off like .. realy .. not cool

AND u said >> thats how u see it ? ? .. well .. lets me tell u the good news isss .. its a FACT .. fact buddy dont worry
its not just how u see it .. its was correct what u see .. no doubt or argue about it ..wich is unfortunately .. suckss

this girl she will not only gang bang from ur back with the waiter and the driver and the neighbor and the bar tender and the ugly old man in the pic ..
she can even bdsm with the MCs father infront of u .. i know this kind or womens attitude


and ... She is supposed to be my sister in the game as I remember?

oh no .... this is gonna be terrible ..i know it

damit i loved this game

 

[Skankhunt 4 2 0]

Nice update
Thanks

 

[TheDwayneTrain]

Awesome so far! Big fan of the exhibitionist and "free love" vibes thus far.

If you were to create a Patreon or what have you, I'd be happy to pledge (but I get that with limited free time to work on this project, it might be the more responsible to hold off for now).

 

[hakarlman]

Does anyone know any other games like this...

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With a woman who looks the same age as emma, in her late twenties, even early thirties?