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Well, not one of mine worked. :-(
And also, when I play the non-perverted route, it still ends at the endpoint of the previous version, is that intentional?
And also, when I play the non-perverted route, it still ends at the endpoint of the previous version, is that intentional?
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This is probably the issue that the other people have reported. It is NOT intentional and I've updated the files so that this issue have been resolved.
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Ok finished it up.
Thoughts:
Pacifism route still fucking blows. I'm sorry to say it. But it really does. There is nothing worthwhile in it, to me outside of dipping in to get Alice to grab your dick before she goes off to fuck someone else. I was hoping there might be something interesting you'd get for skipping out on watching Melody masturbate, but there isn't.
On another replay, my issues with the MC come a little bit more into focus. Even doing the perversion route he is just milquetoast as all get out until he randomly decides to be assertive. It's actually a fair bit of tonal whiplash. A perfect example of this is actually the Melody scene from 0.51, the MC is totally fine with Leah and Alice, then suddenly hates the idea of her. Basically, his internal monologue is consistently passive, but then you get the option to randomly be assertive. It's an issue.
The Leah scene was both cool and awful. Cool in that hey, Leah is hot. Awful as it's one of the more cliched ways of keeping the main character from actually having 'the sex' that I've seen. It's OK for the MC to have sex without dragging it out into eternity. They can fuck early on, the porn game police will not break down your door and throw you to the ground for promoting premarital fornication.
But honestly, and I fully admit that this is a pet peeve of mine... the rubbing on the outside of the pussy instead of sex is nothing but a transparent stalling tactic. Period. There is no good story reason that the MC should not have actually fucked Leah. Especially as he seems to have forgotten that he was a virgin and was acting very much like he was not.
Finally, there is not nearly enough interaction with the Step-sis-friend. Look it's fine if their interactions were limited in the first couple of days because of school, and the detentions or whatever. Now it feels like every day it's some new excuse to not share more than a few sentences with her. It feels like the biggest conversation that she and the MC have had thus far is about her fucking someone else. The interactions they DO have are usually highlights, but it still feels like wheel spinning. Truth or Dare would have been a great time to learn more about Alice, but she bows out early on. We learn nothing new about her. Hell, both of the biggest revelations about Alice come from someone else, and they are both missed opportunities for drama with her.
Highlights are still the scenes with Melody, even if she did back out on her promise to fool around with you from the night before. The dialog still pops at its best, and the characters are well drawn and fit their types well. I love the nickname running joke thing as well. Still, want to see where this goes and I hope that the annoying stuff gets pared back going forward.
Thoughts:
Pacifism route still fucking blows. I'm sorry to say it. But it really does. There is nothing worthwhile in it, to me outside of dipping in to get Alice to grab your dick before she goes off to fuck someone else. I was hoping there might be something interesting you'd get for skipping out on watching Melody masturbate, but there isn't.
On another replay, my issues with the MC come a little bit more into focus. Even doing the perversion route he is just milquetoast as all get out until he randomly decides to be assertive. It's actually a fair bit of tonal whiplash. A perfect example of this is actually the Melody scene from 0.51, the MC is totally fine with Leah and Alice, then suddenly hates the idea of her. Basically, his internal monologue is consistently passive, but then you get the option to randomly be assertive. It's an issue.
The Leah scene was both cool and awful. Cool in that hey, Leah is hot. Awful as it's one of the more cliched ways of keeping the main character from actually having 'the sex' that I've seen. It's OK for the MC to have sex without dragging it out into eternity. They can fuck early on, the porn game police will not break down your door and throw you to the ground for promoting premarital fornication.
But honestly, and I fully admit that this is a pet peeve of mine... the rubbing on the outside of the pussy instead of sex is nothing but a transparent stalling tactic. Period. There is no good story reason that the MC should not have actually fucked Leah. Especially as he seems to have forgotten that he was a virgin and was acting very much like he was not.
Finally, there is not nearly enough interaction with the Step-sis-friend. Look it's fine if their interactions were limited in the first couple of days because of school, and the detentions or whatever. Now it feels like every day it's some new excuse to not share more than a few sentences with her. It feels like the biggest conversation that she and the MC have had thus far is about her fucking someone else. The interactions they DO have are usually highlights, but it still feels like wheel spinning. Truth or Dare would have been a great time to learn more about Alice, but she bows out early on. We learn nothing new about her. Hell, both of the biggest revelations about Alice come from someone else, and they are both missed opportunities for drama with her.
Highlights are still the scenes with Melody, even if she did back out on her promise to fool around with you from the night before. The dialog still pops at its best, and the characters are well drawn and fit their types well. I love the nickname running joke thing as well. Still, want to see where this goes and I hope that the annoying stuff gets pared back going forward.
- Nov 13, 2017
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Great read, thanks for taking your time to give such detailed explanation for your reasoning. Some things I agree with you on while others I don't. I think you brought up quite a few good points and trust me when I say that all feedback I get on the game DOES actually affect the development of the game. The overarching story won't change all that much but the way it's presented can change.
It may be obvious but I won't go back and change the story, since I feel like that would betray people who played through it and liked it. I might however go back and add things to the story (like I did when I released V0.51). I can however change the future of the story, and this is where your feedback matters the most.
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Hello. Is the updated version on the first page ?? I downloaded the version, restart the game from the beginning, but for me the pac route ends in the same place as version 0.5
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Not going to read the thread and spoil myself but I had to point this out:
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I'm sorry to hear about your life story but this isn't the time nor place for deeply personal information.
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Yes. If the FFC continues in the same spirit, he will kill his own promising project.
Or maybe not. We've already seen all that shit on Patreon, which continues to make money, despite the poor quality, delays and a small amount of content.
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Until we get the official fixed version, attached is an un-offical patch to fix all the issues I could find and that were reported so far in the thread. Bear in mind I'm not the developer, so some of the "fixes" were just altering the dialogue to make it fit the available options/images.
And I've also updated my full IC and Pick Your Sister's Name mod here:
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- Fixed the label issue, so now the v0.6 content is enabled
- Fixed missing images at coffee shop if you didn't visit Mel while Alice & Leah were having their, uh, "study" session
- (Don't hate me @V.A. Laurie) Fixed the very few grammar & spelling errors I found.
- Changed some dialogue for drinking/not drinking party choice
- Fixed an error on "Incest Porn" in truth or dare where Leah's dialogue showed as Alice
- UPDATE v2 - fixed error on my part in the spin the bottle game
And I've also updated my full IC and Pick Your Sister's Name mod here:
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Can you shoot me a PM here or on Discord? If you found grammar & spelling errors, we about to fucking fight man. Just kidding. I'd love it if you shared what you found so I can correct the official script files for the future!
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ntr? i see no ntr. especially after this update.
did you even play the game to the end?
also alice never lied. she may not have told the player something, but she didn't ever lie about it.