Analysis v0.5.121
Great narrative, the dialogue feels grounded at the same time it knows how to be fun from time to time, leaning more towards an anime, but never overexaggerated.
The story is full of mysteries that leaves a trail of crumbs, sometimes very subtly and other times more blunt, with enough breadth between the "fun" part and the drama. Here, both aspects shine, the fun part doesnt shy away from setting the right mood first while the drama does a nice job permeating the surface.
While the girls design and aesthetics are on point and probably one of the best in the biz, with almost realistic facial expressions, the animations feels a little lackluster in comparison, the same goes for the sound design, which I believe could drastically increase the mood in certain scenes, a few generalistic narrated dialogues here and there goes a long way populating the imaginary.
Some background renders could also have some love, especially in the quality of the shaders/lighting, sometimes the contrast between a beautifully rendered character expression and the background assets are enough to pull you out of the scene. The same level of love is desired for the sound design, some scenes end up desyncing with the bg music and an odd blank fills the gap from time to time.
Overall, beyond technical issues, my may complaing would be to let the sexual tension grows stronger instead of immedialty having sex with every girl right out of the gate, the bridge between letting certain things happen and finally getting to have sex with them could be better explored.
And I also loved the exploration bits, a missed that both on the school and later in the chapter 5, could have added to the mystery.
Great potential, hopes for the best.