- Nov 24, 2017
- 87
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You lost me at Mom's shitty granny panties. Seriously, I feel like I need a shower after reading this. Awesome writing if you are going for a truly disturbing horror story, but this seems more like shameless pandering to niche fetishes. Without the "avoidable content", there isn't much content at all ... just a long car ride, too many hands, and some dirty panties that MC steals to do absolutely nothing with. Was the washing machine in the missing renders?
To be honest, I could power through of the more questionable stuff for a good story, but the execution suggests that story development will always be an afterthought. Who puts out an update that you have to go back and replay just because the developer left out half the renders because he/she was too busy describing MC's mom's body odor in intricate detail? Shorter, complete updates would be better.
Also, stop blaming poor lighting on people's monitors. Developer clearly needs to study more if they are going to do low-light renders. There is no such thing as "natural lighting" in CGI. Amateurs insist that the viewers adjust monitors that work fine for all other content. Professionals find ways to sneak in lights to achieve the desired effect without sacrificing viewability. A few landscaping lights on that staircase would do wonders. MC could also wear a miner's helmet to add more light to the upskirt shots. It would be no more of a stretch than Mom not noticing her son lying on the ground to look up her dress. If this was another time when reality and MC fantasy blur, why not make her dress disappear like it did 5 seconds later?
Sorry to be so negative, but it is extremely disappointing to see a story with so much promise turn into a fettie catfishing expedition so quickly.
To be honest, I could power through of the more questionable stuff for a good story, but the execution suggests that story development will always be an afterthought. Who puts out an update that you have to go back and replay just because the developer left out half the renders because he/she was too busy describing MC's mom's body odor in intricate detail? Shorter, complete updates would be better.
Also, stop blaming poor lighting on people's monitors. Developer clearly needs to study more if they are going to do low-light renders. There is no such thing as "natural lighting" in CGI. Amateurs insist that the viewers adjust monitors that work fine for all other content. Professionals find ways to sneak in lights to achieve the desired effect without sacrificing viewability. A few landscaping lights on that staircase would do wonders. MC could also wear a miner's helmet to add more light to the upskirt shots. It would be no more of a stretch than Mom not noticing her son lying on the ground to look up her dress. If this was another time when reality and MC fantasy blur, why not make her dress disappear like it did 5 seconds later?
Sorry to be so negative, but it is extremely disappointing to see a story with so much promise turn into a fettie catfishing expedition so quickly.