VN Ren'Py Genesis [Ep.24 - Part 1] [Solensis]

[OmenEht]

Really like the game so far. I'm Norwegian, and it's so rare to see my language used in a game.

However, some of the words are translated wrong. It doesn't really matter that much, seeing as most people don't speak Norwegian (/Danish/Sweedish), but I thought I'd let you know. For example: "Elven" is a norwegian word for "The river", the english word "Elvish" would be "Alvisk" great elven godess is "store Alviske Gudinne" (mektige alviske gudinne might be better, mighty instead of large). Also, when summoning spirits in the forest, it should be "Jeg befaler deg" not "Jeg bestiller deg". Bestiller means order in the sense of purchase, like ordering something online, not as in commanding.

There are some phrases that feel a bit off too, even if not technically incorrect, but again, it doesn't really matter all that much. Still very fun to see it used, and assuming you don't speak Norwegian, very well done, not "Google Translate Norwegian" as I call it.

 

[grahegri]

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[Aqua888]

Still the floor stuff , waiting for the story.....

 

[iluvclamp]

Still the floor stuff , waiting for the story.....

Yes, I was disappointed in the last update with only floor 4 content.

 

[Solensis]

Still the floor stuff , waiting for the story.....

The Tower is part of the story.

 

[T4t0rt]

Idk why, but this game promise to be something epic.

 

[Azsouth]

wtf happened, this game used to have an engaging story and was updated regularly w/ a decent amount of added content, now we get like 5 minutes of a half chapter or some side story stuff from the mind palace when we used to get maybe 30m-1h of content including mind palace stuff. Used to be excited w/ anticipation to see where the story was going, been pretty disappointing ever since around the titan battle.

 

[Wolfeszorn]

The Tower is part of the story.

correct me if i´m wrong, but wasn´t the parallax tower stuff a side story? At least it wasn´t rly connected to the story previously.
I´m gonna be brutally honest, i kinda lost interest when you decided to add it to the main game. For me it just added nothing new or interesting to the story for quiet some time. Hope we´re getting back on track soon

 

[broken_division]

Compressed version Ep.23 - Floor 05 of the game

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[Lordmoses711high]

Ah... The floor stuff is still the main focus.. Damn..
See ya when we are about to beat the living hell out of the religious nutjobs.. Probably next year..

 

[Corathor]

The Tower is part of the story.

come on, while it's a part of the story, waiting for updates, and only getting 'side content' and no main story progression is weak. Im not saying we expect every update to be perfect, or a full chapter or anything, but give us -some- content related to the main story, not just little puzzle stuff that might take 5-20 minutes at most. I get if the creator is busy, and is working on stuff, i mean its not like we're paying him a salary to work for us or anything BUT, and I am sure a lot of people would agree with me, instead of this piece meal tiny tiny tiny updates we're getting that add very little, we'd rather him put together a comprehensive update that actually moved things forward, even if we had to wait to get it. Its so very disappointing to see an update, and find out it's less than 10 minutes of content.

And I just noticed, you are the creator, so take what im saying with a grain of salt Not trying to be offensive, merely giving perspective. Still love the main story, just irritated it's taking so long to get to more of it

 

[Corathor]

correct me if i´m wrong, but wasn´t the parallax tower stuff a side story? At least it wasn´t rly connected to the story previously.
I´m gonna be brutally honest, i kinda lost interest when you decided to add it to the main game. For me it just added nothing new or interesting to the story for quiet some time. Hope we´re getting back on track soon

it's both? Don't get me wrong, i 100% agree with you. I don't mind the tower being part of the main story but it should've been integrated in a much better way, such as maybe him getting a quest from his mindspace or mind palace whatever it was called, and having to clear a floor, and each floor gives him something in his mind palace, or moves the story forward somehow, or whatever, but this whole getting a floor of 'puzzles' for content for an update is just weak.

 

[indio68]

damn dev, still nothing for the actual story? really?? again with this pretty boring level into MC mind?? i'm really disappointed, i want to see what's the fate or my group FFS..not play with my mind...c'mon i lovce this VN but iit seems that you lost the verve and tring to delay time..pls continue with the story next update..not this pretty useless Mind nonsense.THANKS

 

[indio68]

come on, while it's a part of the story, waiting for updates, and only getting 'side content' and no main story progression is weak. Im not saying we expect every update to be perfect, or a full chapter or anything, but give us -some- content related to the main story, not just little puzzle stuff that might take 5-20 minutes at most. I get if the creator is busy, and is working on stuff, i mean its not like we're paying him a salary to work for us or anything BUT, and I am sure a lot of people would agree with me, instead of this piece meal tiny tiny tiny updates we're getting that add very little, we'd rather him put together a comprehensive update that actually moved things forward, even if we had to wait to get it. Its so very disappointing to see an update, and find out it's less than 10 minutes of content.

And I just noticed, you are the creator, so take what im saying with a grain of salt Not trying to be offensive, merely giving perspective. Still love the main story, just irritated it's taking so long to get to more of it

COMPLETELY AGREE. MY THOUUGHT EXACTLY

 

[itachi221997]

good game novel visual

 

[JRD220]

Anyone unlocked this gallery scene?

 

[TJP623]

The Tower is part of the story.

About how many floors are left? While I personally am fine with playing them, most others feel as though it has caused the main story to come to a standstill.

 

[MrBenny]

Hmm...I'm wondering if MC should take the "I wish to take my revenge" choice (Image below shows nets dark fight...using the 0x52_URM tool), or the other choice "I only wish for justice"....which nets nothing (no point or skill)?

I'm looking for the neutral path choices, so is this skill / choice need for that path? And how important is it? I get the feeling revenge could be used against the MC later.




Update:
I tried both choices to see the outcomes.
https://f95zone.to/threads/genesis-ep-23-floor-05-solensis.65092/post-12262789

 

[Jimskeleton]

About how many floors are left? While I personally am fine with playing them, most others feel as though it has caused the main story to come to a standstill.

I'm assuming another 5, we just completed the fifth floor and the android said the tower had 10 floors if I remember correctly.

I would have to agree with most of the other comments, I'm still enjoying the story and although the tower is part of that it does feel like it's dragging on, it could be because of the small and slow updates but it does feel like it's been a long time since we've been separated from Scarlet, Marie and the others and progressing what feels more like the main story.

 

[mag5246]

The first problem is: this trial takes place inside virtual reality inside Mind Palace inside the mind of the MC located in a fantasy world created for trial in the video game. With each level of this dream within a dream within a dream, empathy for the characters and interest in what is happening is lost.
The second: even without this, this chapter feels like a very drawn-out filler. When the android said that there were 5 more floors ahead and each one would be longer, I almost deleted the game.
And it started much earlier. The plot has long begun to mostly wander from side to side instead of moving forward.

I really hope that on the 6th floor the MC will get tired (as we are) of these games with the psychopath and will punch his way out.
In the “real" world (as real as it is), much more important problems await him: well, kidnapped companions, friend in coma, other candidates, you know, things like that.