I hate to be "that" girl but it is quite easy to follow.
It's really not difficult if you pay attention.
I wouldn't say easy, but I agree not difficult to follow either...
The "12 hours earlier" flashbacks were clearly "backstory" and taking place while Celeste was laying on the ground in the present with her arm cut off... At first, I was really, really confused because she was so badass, then got her ass kicked, I was thinking, WTH? Are those two really that strong?
I see where the previous versions stopped, and where the updates picked back up.
I can absolutely see how the story would be a struggle to follow with time/months between updates given where those breaks in the story occur. There are some very simple, linear stories I have to go back and remind myself what's happened when updates come out...
So, I can see how some struggled with this one, before...
However...now though...
Even easier to understand now we are back in the present. Previously, that may have been a somewhat fair argument, why I spent months telling new people to wait for the update before playing. It really isn't overly difficult to understand at all.
Yeah, the picture is clearer. If I hadn't finally got back to "now", yeah, I can see how those before may have struggled with the story.
I'm glad I recently found this one, and not before the story got back to the present...
Otherwise, I'd be scratching my head wondering, WTF, where is this going?...
Maviarab, just think if that first part of Love & Jealousy had stopped 3 times in the middle, with several months between updates, and folks in that thread were trying to fit pieces together to follow the story and figure out where it was going, what was happening...

Folks have had a lot of back and forth with that one, and Part 1 was at a very good stop point...
Folks are going back and making timelines with that one to make sense of it all...
And in this one, a hell of a lot happened in those past "12 hours" before it got back to the present...
Namco15, loving this one so far.
Excellent VN.