- Jan 3, 2022
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Thank you so much! Some of my ideas aren't very sharp, I just show it so we can discuss. I see that Kate's story is quite rich and more complete than Max's story, Kate's story you would have more characters to work with and the plot would be more extensive. However, everything has to be planned and calculated so that things work out because the story, plot and script of characters don't have to be boring. So if DS built something new and different from other games, he needs to try his best for the game to reach beyond success, because I believe it's a game that could easily rescue a public and make this game grow again. However, the work would be very arduous and I believe that DS is putting the story in the drawer so as not to have to abandon the project due to lack of creativity.
project Kate, like i promissed i try to make an alternative storyline, i just need someone for good grafics, can you guys help me out ?
this is a sample :
Karen calls Kate
Karen : Kate meet me at the principals office at 11.30
Kate : (wondering) What did I do wrong ?
Principal Office
Kate ; Hello , You wanted to meet wit me ?
Karen with principal ; Kate yes glad you could come
Karen ; We have an issue with the rules
Karen ; We have discussed it and we can’t have teachers and students don’t following the rules
Karen ; So we need to take measures
Karen : Kate, me and the principal, we do not like Angela and Adam being together, and since it is your ongoing, you need to salve it
Kate ; But Karen, excuse, it is not my ongoing, Angela is after Professor Adam, She has a crush.
Karen; We know Kate, you wil not get punished for that, not yet
Karen; We have a pill for Adam which will losen him up so you can convince him to follow you and not Angela
Karen ; We do not want Angela being invalved with Professor Adam, am I clear Kate ?
Kate ; But why me ?
Karen ; Stop it Kate, it is time to show us you can do this, prove your loyalty to us !
Principle ; Karen, Please, stop pushing, I think Kate is not ready.
Kate ; Fine, I do it, I don’t want anymore trouble
Karen ; Now you are my girl ! I am counting on you Kate
Principle ; Thank you Kate, much appreciated , but are you sure you can handle it ?
Kate and Adam passes in hallway
Kate ; Professor Adam !
Kate : I am so glad to see you !
Adam : Yes Kate ? , How can I help ?
Kate ; I wanted to apologize for my actions.
Adam : Kate….
Kate : Please let me explain, but not here
Adam : So what do you suggest ?
Kate ; You like to go for a Coffie with me ? We have bin there before.
Adam : I am not sure we should do this, Angela will….
Kate ; See, not here, please, I will tell you everything, please
Adam ; Ok, if you insist, but Angela….
Kate : Come Professor Adam, let’s go for the coffie
Kate and Adam go to the coffie shop
Vicky : Hello Kate, Hello Adam,
Kate : Hello Vicky, can we take the quite place ?
Adam ; Hello Vicky
Vicky ; Sure Kate it’s all in the back
Kate ; It’s so nice here Adam
Vicky ; Would you like to order already ?
Adam ; It’s on me Vicky, we both wanted your premium Coffee
Vicky ; It’s you two together or as there anyone more coming ?
Adam ; No Vicky, just us two.
Vicky ; I see. Be back in a moment
Adam ; Kate, Angela must not know were here, it’s very …..
Vicky ; 2 Premium Coffees, anything else ?
Adam ; No Vicky Thank you, it looks marvelous like always
Vicky ;Please call if you need anything, I be just around the corner
Kate ; Prof. Adam, I checked, No one is here, I tell you very straight, I have managed to erase the pictures Angela took with here phone.
Kate ; But She is searching who did it
Adam : Kate ….. how did you manage ? And why did you do it?
Adam ; But I am so happy I get my life back
Kate ; No problem Adam, I hate the blackmailing
Adam ; Kate, I really do not know how to thank you