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Well, finish work. I know nobody cares but I tried to be a shit writer 10+ years ago, I used to write fiction, romances..
but it's a little difficult to write eroticism, but not impossible.
This is the final part, my little work ends here (yea Hallelujah); I just wanted to show that it is possible to build good plots and a good story. English it's not my native language, but I always try not to try to "engrish", even if it ends up happening (my eyes get tired for being too exposed to light).
Chapter 1, 2 & 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Previous Chapter
Here I tried to create a script that has personality in the characters, so as the scripts and story got big I had to split it into three parts.
If you like to read, maybe you won't regret it, you will understand what I meant about the game having a rich plot. Enjoy!
In this part we know a little more about Kira, in the first part I show more about. Of all the BB games, they all create the empty character, no personality or a "cheap whore" type woman. For me she should be one of the most important characters and have a high personality like the others. I also show a different side of Ann, as in every game they complained that Ann was stupid and stupid. Yeah, more or less...
Max in College
but it's a little difficult to write eroticism, but not impossible.
This is the final part, my little work ends here (yea Hallelujah); I just wanted to show that it is possible to build good plots and a good story. English it's not my native language, but I always try not to try to "engrish", even if it ends up happening (my eyes get tired for being too exposed to light).
Chapter 1, 2 & 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Previous Chapter
Here I tried to create a script that has personality in the characters, so as the scripts and story got big I had to split it into three parts.
If you like to read, maybe you won't regret it, you will understand what I meant about the game having a rich plot. Enjoy!
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In this part we know a little more about Kira, in the first part I show more about. Of all the BB games, they all create the empty character, no personality or a "cheap whore" type woman. For me she should be one of the most important characters and have a high personality like the others. I also show a different side of Ann, as in every game they complained that Ann was stupid and stupid. Yeah, more or less...
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Max in College
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I also agree, it was a mistake DS put Max in college. I know a lot of people don't like BB but it's something more familiar that people like more, perhaps because the old game was not continued and did not have an ending or also some were disappointed with the new versions of clones. I usually don't like to see an MC do super well in their stories or that everything is easy, but it's a porn and erotic game and I see the public want more of it. At the time when DS announced the crossover I believed it would be one thing but then it was another, that however everything was not very good. I believed that the two stories would have an impact, for example Karen and Kira would have already met, if Alice was with Max Kate would be in another relationship so things could move forward. It's not an easy task and it's also not something that can work out, as I tried to create.
I see a lot of people complain about the DS, sometimes because of the writing, other times about this and that, but it is not so easy for those who are not fluent in English, you end up making a lot of mistakes when writing and getting confused a lot with the words, this can also end up giving you exhaustion and discouragement, because all the time you ask yourself, was it good? It didn't turn out well, and you end up trying to get more inspiration and inspiration is something instantaneous that if you stop for a moment your mind goes blank and you forget everything or end up losing focus, this has happened to me several times.
I see a lot of people complain about the DS, sometimes because of the writing, other times about this and that, but it is not so easy for those who are not fluent in English, you end up making a lot of mistakes when writing and getting confused a lot with the words, this can also end up giving you exhaustion and discouragement, because all the time you ask yourself, was it good? It didn't turn out well, and you end up trying to get more inspiration and inspiration is something instantaneous that if you stop for a moment your mind goes blank and you forget everything or end up losing focus, this has happened to me several times.
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In the world of this game, everyone's either a lonely horny slut or a closet slut.
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Okay. Here's what's going to happen. DS is going to drop Glamour because it's obvious the wheels fell off the bus. A reboot of BB! Now wait for it... You can play as either Max trying to bang you family, or you can play as Eric slamming Ann in the beginning and cucking Max by seducing the sisters! Eh!? Brilliant, or what?
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"bigger than expected" it's his catch phrase at this point
I always believed that the developer is taking a shit. He just confirmed my suspicions."bigger than expected" it's his catch phrase at this point
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I'm convinced that one day around 0.26 he found out his morning shit was bigger than the previous morning's shit and decided to turn the fecal matter into a game.
Maybe all the grind in the game came about as a result of painful constipation.
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I don't know. Interesting? It'd at least amount to more than some dude swinging his mickey at anything female.
I think the problem lies not in the "depth" of the characters in these games (I don't know who expects deep character in porn games anyway...), but in the fact that these game developers take so much time to finish the games (if ever) that the players build their own versions of said characters and their stories in their mind waiting for months and months for the next content update, and when the new patch does come out, it never lives up to the imagination of the players
and "swinging his mickey at anything" is sort of the whole point behind this genre of games, how and why would anyone complain about it is beyond me, I mean - I don't play BB games for the dishwashing, cleaning pool and the meaning of life conversation experience
and "swinging his mickey at anything" is sort of the whole point behind this genre of games, how and why would anyone complain about it is beyond me, I mean - I don't play BB games for the dishwashing, cleaning pool and the meaning of life conversation experience
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Why i dont have showering together on the quest list and howmany points do i need in cheerleader quest i have 1000 plus bu still not green color what i am missing or my save files are broken? This game have very painfull mechanics to much grinding or you need luck next quest to activate why cheerleading not finished and says finish still white color can anyone help!?
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Yeah and it's VN and not a groundhog day grind-fest.
Too good to be true, forget it.