And the saddest thing is that both stories have great potential. Just the storyline for Kate, DS flushed down the toilet and reduced everything to stupid fucking. As for Max, there was no plot initially. And it would be nice to prescribe the main storyline around the college and the "mysterious club" (which does not negate a bunch of all sorts of sex events and secondary quests). Make several endings (not necessarily even good ones), depending on the passage and parameters of the MC.
Even for Max (yes, this is not a typo), everything could be made interesting. For example, in the prologue, stir up a situation in which Max would have an identity crisis and he took his balls in his fist and began to change his life. For example, so that he takes up his studies, goes to work on his body in a fitness club (or some other sports section) in order to put his body in order. By the way, a good start for getting to know Julia and Kate, as well as working part-time in the same club for Julia. Instead of broadcasting the whole life of the house where you live. In the process, Max learns about the college from Alice at home and from Kate at a part-time job, as well as strange things going on there. Well, and on this to tie the main storyline.
And we get two views on the same story. And arrange it all with TWO games, not one. Events do not have to repeat themselves. You can add anything but the dumbest way to make money - streaming your home. Hell, even playing as Kate and fucking with Neil for money isn't so dumb.
Well, something like this.
