RC-1138 Boss

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Loved the update.
I think after the whole week travelling with Slater to his last wrestling fight with Cazador in Mexico Jane decided to adopt a look resembling him. He was always her idol when she started her career and now she needed to pick up her pieces and get up to fight again after that massacre she suffered against Farida.

Quite liked how she focused not only on wrestling techniques with Slater and Carmen but also on martial training. Buff Jane was a pleasant surprise. :love:
Also her fight against Carmen was great and the ending served as "revenge" after the fucking Carmen gave Jade after their date night. :LOL:

Speaking of it i feel like there are some mixed signals there. Carmen wants a serious relationship but refuses to say anything meaningful about herself, plus her apartment looks more like a temporary hiding place than a home. I suspect future complications...:unsure:

And let's not forget whatever deal Isabella has with sex trafficking.

By the way, speaking of Isabela i was not expecting Farida to be her bottom bitch.
 

JameyLatterson

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What is used to "animate" the characters? I know ren'py is just the software for the game, but I've seen models like these everywhere, I just can't find what it is. :(
 

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Main issue I find is I would like more options mid-match to decide the outcome of the match. If I want to get absolutely wrecked or submit I should be able to. There should be a wrong choices mid-match, middling options and a right choice or just a right and wrong depending on how much work you want to do. As it stands, it feels like I have very little impact on the story of what happens.
 

RC-1138 Boss

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The problem is that those fights are part of the main storyline DelinquentProductions is telling and branching on them would force the story to branch too.

For instance, it was necessary for Jane to lose badly against Farida so she could rise and take things more seriously for a rematch, but had she lost to Carmen then those two would be having their own revenge match instead and then Jane's story would need to be changed to accomodate that.
This means more time writting dialogues, narrative, making renders and coding which would take a lot of extra time.


It is easier for a lone dev to write branching choices in events like that yatch party, where no matter who Jane choose to sleep with the starting and ending point would be the same.
 
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Johan_0000

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I played two latest updat's content and I have to say this was incredible.
I never thought I would have this much fun playing a AVN abt wrestling lol.

At some point I laughed my ass off when she underestimated her opponent like cm'on Farida look like the cyborg russian evil guy in American movies lol. Ofc she's super strong There was plenty of ways to test her strength but she chose the riskiest lol. Glad she got humbled.
Then there was the training arc, and the EPIC transfo our MC received man she looks badass and she proved she could kick asses lol. I think dev/s rly got smt going for him. Yk I didn't feel impressed at the choregraphy of the fight nor was there any flashy/supernatural skill but I was rly cheering for her to win. Thinking man she's cool as hell and I think this is what wrestling is abt, it's all abt being cool man lol.
I rly don't know how to explain it but despite not feeling "impressed" at how the fight was going. I was Enjoying it a lot, I rly don't know how to describe it, it's kinda frustrating.





THX man I can't wait to see Farida's fight
 
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Johan_0000

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Maaan I wonder if I should add this to my shonen list. Jane def has that shonen spirit but I rly don't know how I should rank it mmmm.

Guy how would you rate this one?
(I don't want to use reviews bc it seems like ppl give the stars randomly lol)



THX
 
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RC-1138 Boss

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Yep same for me, MC new look sucks, she looks like she is an 80s pornstar, and not the good kind.
She looks like a 1980s wrestler. It was on purpose considering how Jane kept looking at Slater's old poster.

I hope she holds a grudge and takes it out on Jane's ass :p

Great update
To be fair that was Jane's revenge since Carmen had already wrecked her ass after their date. :LOL:

But instead she turned into a dumb and angry she-hulk like Farida.
Nah, she was smart enough to bait Farida and the bottom bitch took it.
 
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