Well, iam midway through chapter 2 i guess... wanted to share some opinions of mine so far...
First of all, i like the start of the game very much. Not the most originally story (well of course the DEV liked The departed an the godfather, no doubt about that... but iam a HUGE fan of scorsese too) but alongside the AVNs around here it is something different. So, thats a huge plus.
NTR ist part of the game but easily avoidable. so good work on that front, but yeah the "danger" of getting NTR is something that works well in the game.
You play as one protagonist, but you see many scenes out of the view of the others and make decisions for them (James, Zoe and so on) this is a little strange, but it works out ok i guess...
The Renders are nice looking (especially the girls are well made) but have some errors here and there i noticed... for example the flowers at the desk of Cindy. Or like some characters are floating 10 centimeters above the floor and some things like that. Not too many and not too bad, but flaws i noticed, and which the really good games around here dont have that often.
What you need the most, please please make a (optional) text-box... its really hard to read sometimes.
I will watch the game going on, i like it, but its not good enough to pledge on patreon (sry there a way better games out there and money is tight, cant pledge for everyone) we will see if the upcoming chapters will change my mind in that.