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You're fine, I've seen some seriously horrible stuff. Like I've seen stuff I where I wish it was MTL that murdered it, but its just really terrible grammar sometimes. You are not even close to the bad mark. Don't sweat it too much, I am just happy you have legit proofreaders.
No I didn't know it until now, basically, it was added to hide some posters that could have been a copyright problem.
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I don't like sandbox/point & click, but I like the rest of the tags. I will give it a shot, the art is really good! <3
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It looks good and interesting, let's see how it is.
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The art looks good, in the sandbox maybe you could add some buttons for fast travel and not have to be pressing all the doors to get out (I have no problem with that, but many people do not like having to do that and they do not play it or directly ignore it for that ) you could say This version is a demo since there is nothing to do, but rather shows us how the game is going to be.
Good luck dev
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Pretty sure the MC just goes back in time. Not another world.
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To put 'Great artwork' as comment is questionable. The style for the redhead girls looks like carbon-copy from a certain manga, '100 Girlfriends' by Nakamura Rikito, down to the mole below the mother's left eye. The style for the white-haired girl also looks suspiciously similar to Elizabeth from 7 Deadly sins. That, and the fact that there's no artstyle consistency in the rest of the characters is quite suspicious.
Might need to wait and see for the HCG, at this point there's barely enough content for this to be called a game.
Might need to wait and see for the HCG, at this point there's barely enough content for this to be called a game.
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Dude you are going too far, all the characters were imagined on koikatsu by myself and my artist was inspired by that to make the characters.
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I would actually suggest a ; here
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Just ignore him. He's speaking out of his ass to seem contrarian. Don't even know where he got the idea that the white haired girl looks anything like
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. And from what I've seen the redheads have no single reference to
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seeing as they look nothing like the girls in there. 
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would be great if he made a character that looks like one of the characters in either of thoseJust ignore him. He's just speaking out of his ass to seem contrarian. Don't even know where he got the idea that the white haired girl looks anything likeYou must be registered to see the links. And from what I've seen the redheads have no single reference toYou must be registered to see the linksseeing as they look nothing like the girls in there.
a big early fuck you
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Lmfao that would've riled him up to type away further although I'd enjoy a good parody reference here or there.
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Both work, but they have the same purpose. It depends on how formal you're trying to be. In this case in the game a ; would probably be better, but I'd still err on the side of caution and just use a period. It connects the two thoughts together better with the ;, but again, I based what I wrote on the fact I have zero context.
