Brok TheDog

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Well I'm on part 1 of the game, I come across some really weird passages. So I asked for a screenshot of a weird passage.

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I agree that the guy has super sperm, but last I heard he's not super man. Since when can a man, even if he is muscular, carry a woman like that? We can see it very clearly during the move that he makes his appearance just for a box in the kitchen. And there, he carries it as if it were a feather. These are a total incomprehension.
 
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Dark Silence

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Well I'm on part 1 of the game, I come across some really weird passages. So I asked for a screenshot of a weird passage.

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I agree that the guy has super sperm, but last I heard he's not super man. Since when can a man, even if he is muscular, carry a woman like that? We can see it very clearly during the move that he makes his appearance just for a box in the kitchen. And there, he carries it as if it were a feather. These are a total incomprehension.
She's very light. Not as light as Shizuka though. Plus the wall is right behind her.
 

elumiknotty

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The asians have a bunch of lewd scenes compared to some others I much prefer. But since I only like a few of the characters, maybe I'm just racist like that.
It's one update. Out of 40+. Updates usually focus on just a couple characters. .42 and .43 happen to focus on the Asian LI storylines.

It really sounds like you're saying "if a minority is any more than passively involved as a background character then it's tokenism and/or must be a fetish."

In which case yes to your final sentence.
 

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She's very light. Not as light as Shizuka though. Plus the wall is right behind her.
She's very light. Not as light as Shizuka though. Plus the wall is right behind her.
No, the (light) blow doesn't work (he carries it with one hand, don't overdo it). And the blow from the wall even less (she only poses against it at the moment of orgasm). When there is an inconsistency, it must be said clearly, we must stop finding bogus excuses. This doesn't help him improve.
 

Dark Silence

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No, the (light) blow doesn't work (he carries it with one hand, don't overdo it). And the blow from the wall even less (she only poses against it at the moment of orgasm). When there is an inconsistency, it must be said clearly, we must stop finding bogus excuses. This doesn't help him improve.
All I can say is, if you don't like it, move on to something that you do like.
 
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onecoule Many things in the game make no sense. For example the MC cums more than should be physically possible, multiple times a day sometimes. Characters clothes get taken off instantly at times, sometimes from positions where it shouldn't be possible to take their clothes off. MC got raped in his sleep by a woman who is pretty damn voluptuous, and he doesn't wake up. (This last one is a spoiler... you've been warned.) :WeSmart:

I mean cmon dude, the game isn't meant to be realistic or even make sense at times, this is a porn game, not a story driven game. Why do you care so much about how strong the MC is in one scene compared to another?
 
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Brok TheDog

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All I can say is, if you don't like it, move on to something that you do like.
Hence I said I don't like it. Stop distorting what people say. I'm just giving my opinion on an inconsistency so that developing it doesn't make another mistake. Now if my comment doesn't suit you, report me to a moderator and we'll see what he thinks. Between your non-productive comment and mine which highlights an inconsistency on which developing it can avoid making this type of mistake again.
 

Brok TheDog

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onecoule Many things in the game make no sense. For example the MC cums more than should be physically possible, multiple times a day sometimes. Characters clothes get taken off instantly at times, sometimes from positions where it shouldn't be possible to take their clothes off. MC got raped in his sleep by a woman who is pretty damn voluptuous, and he doesn't wake up. (This last one is a spoiler... you've been warned.) :WeSmart:

I mean cmon dude, the game isn't meant to be realistic or even make sense at times, this is a porn game, not a story driven game. Why do you care so much about how strong the MC is in one scene compared to another?
Exactly, if no one points out these inconsistencies. How can it evolve? If he or the other developer creates games they are passionate about (some just to rip off). Most of it is a beginner (no training in game creation). Without people to tell them what's going well and what's not going well, it can only stagnate while some have enormous potential. This is not just a "Porn Games", this is a work. The guy spent years working on this and deserves respect for it. Currently all the games that he has launched his Finit (which is extremely rare on this forum), This is why I take the time to post a certain point. Otherwise it would end up in my list of totally ignored games on this forum (and the list is extremely long).
 

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Exactly, if no one points out these inconsistencies. How can it evolve? If he or the other developer creates games they are passionate about (some just to rip off). Most of it is a beginner (no training in game creation). Without people to tell them what's going well and what's not going well, it can only stagnate while some have enormous potential. This is not just a "Porn Games", this is a work. The guy spent years working on this and deserves respect for it. Currently all the games that he has launched his Finit (which is extremely rare on this forum), This is why I take the time to post a certain point. Otherwise it would end up in my list of totally ignored games on this forum (and the list is extremely long).
He improved a lot, but there are still some inconsitencies, for example his priapism, did you check out the prequel ? college days,? by the way ?
 

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Exactly, if no one points out these inconsistencies. How can it evolve? If he or the other developer creates games they are passionate about (some just to rip off). Most of it is a beginner (no training in game creation). Without people to tell them what's going well and what's not going well, it can only stagnate while some have enormous potential. This is not just a "Porn Games", this is a work. The guy spent years working on this and deserves respect for it. Currently all the games that he has launched his Finit (which is extremely rare on this forum), This is why I take the time to post a certain point. Otherwise it would end up in my list of totally ignored games on this forum (and the list is extremely long).
You must be new here. This game is held together with porn logic, wholesome vibes and wads of super sperm. This is not only acknowledged by Moon, but he was the first one to point it out. Something doesn't make sense? Nobody cares, it's not supposed to. You're looking for something that just isn't meant to be here with your "critiques".
Not to mention if 130 pound skinny ass 16 year old me could carry my girlfriend at the time on my shoulders then I'm sure this Adonis of a man could too.
 

Dark Silence

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Hence I said I don't like it. Stop distorting what people say. I'm just giving my opinion on an inconsistency so that developing it doesn't make another mistake. Now if my comment doesn't suit you, report me to a moderator and we'll see what he thinks. Between your non-productive comment and mine which highlights an inconsistency on which developing it can avoid making this type of mistake again.
Report you? For what? I wasn't distorting anything. I just made a comment and if you don't like my comment, that's on you.
 
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Elhemeer

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It's not The List™ worthy, but it's still an inane critique of a game that features A man cucking someone on a plane to his face, another man in his kitchen, dining room and bed the same day, and the shepherd.

There hasn't been much realism in this game from the start, and MC being strong enough to pick a girl up, press her to the wall and eat her out doesn't even come close to the over-the-top sex acts that appear in this game.
 
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