VN Ren'Py Abandoned Grimoire [Ch. 1-4 v0.04] [Jack Kerouac]

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A hormone-addled teenage boy with a crush on his sister finds a book of magic spells. What could possibly go wrong?​

Thread Updated: 2019-03-24
Release Date: 2019-03-23
Developer: Jack Kerouac
Censored: No
Version: 0.04
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
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fauxplayer

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This is the second release I've seen recently of a Ren'Py game that is essentially an illustrated version of a well-known piece of erotic fantasy/fiction:

I like this trend :)
 

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This is the second release I've seen recently of a Ren'Py game that is essentially an illustrated version of a well-known piece of erotic fantasy/fiction:

I like this trend :)
God damn, I forgot that site existed.
 

Jack Kerouac

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This is the second release I've seen recently of a Ren'Py game that is essentially an illustrated version of a well-known piece of erotic fantasy/fiction:

I like this trend :)
I'm glad. This is basically an attempt by me to make a Visual Novel, without having to do any writing myself ;). I wanted to focus on learning RenPy and the coding (some editing too).

I have actually re-done the first two chapters three times: once in Visual Novel Maker, once in TyranoBuilder and finally in RenPy. Each system is interesting, but VNM and TB each have shortcomings that RenPy doesn't because it is basically a coding language.

The hardest part of the process so far has been learning Daz Studio and coming up with choices that matter for what is basically a linear story.
 

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This is the second release I've seen recently of a Ren'Py game that is essentially an illustrated version of a well-known piece of erotic fantasy/fiction:

I like this trend :)
Im an avid MCstories reader and I can't think of the other one. Which game are you thinking of?
 

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I'm glad. This is basically an attempt by me to make a Visual Novel, without having to do any writing myself ;). I wanted to focus on learning RenPy and the coding (some editing too).

I have actually re-done the first two chapters three times: once in Visual Novel Maker, once in TyranoBuilder and finally in RenPy. Each system is interesting, but VNM and TB each have shortcomings that RenPy doesn't because it is basically a coding language.

The hardest part of the process so far has been learning Daz Studio and coming up with choices that matter for what is basically a linear story.
OP, you had me at brother-sister incest !
Please keep up the great work !

im ALREADY loving this game !
 

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Im an avid MCstories reader and I can't think of the other one. Which game are you thinking of?
It wasn't a mind-control story. I just meant Ren'Py projects based on previously published erotic stories. The other one I'm thinking of based on .

I'm glad. This is basically an attempt by me to make a Visual Novel, without having to do any writing myself ;). I wanted to focus on learning RenPy and the coding (some editing too).
It's not my business to give you advice or anything, but the Lover's Lane guy went forward without the original author's permission, which created drama, and Patreon doesn't allow incest, so I'm wondering how much traction you expect to get? I hope we get to see a lot more updates!
 
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The pit is more like the pothole. I don't know if it'll come up in the story later, but the text oversold it by a lot compared to the render.
Similarly, the render of you lying on your bed for the blindfold is very odd - looks like the man has a fist instead of the third leg.
Finally, the messaging conversation refers to Addison once as "Jess".
 

Bagger288

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It's not my business to give you advice or anything, but the Lover's Lane guy went forward without the original author's permission, which created drama, and Patreon doesn't allow incest, so I'm wondering how much traction you expect to get? I hope we get to see a lot more updates!
The LL guy also never attributed the story to the actual writer, unlike here. Technically that's not enough to absolve @Jack Kerouac, but many authors would be happy with that.
 
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Claims to be a writer and has 200 patrons paying for his writing. Decides to clone another writer's story and here's a quote "Make a Visual Novel, without having to do any writing myself".

As fauxplayer mentioned, this is the definitely the new trend - popular erotica turned into daz spam.
For those of us who have no interest in erotica without visual aids, it's a real nice new trend that allows us to enjoy it as well. I haven't played this game yet but I'm excited to give it a shot.
 

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the splash picture in the OP is all i want in life..some magic dame making sparkly lights and shit..then..hopefully going all cowgirl on me ..its enough to get me to download and try..
 
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