VN Ren'Py Abandoned Grimoire [Ch. 1-4 v0.04] [Jack Kerouac]

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ArchX

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Hmm.. promising game, but a lil'bit short chapters. I'll watch this game, that's sure. :)
 

TheBlueKnight

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Very pretty sister... I mean game, very pretty game...
 

JoCald

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Claims to be a writer and has 200 patrons paying for his writing. Decides to clone another writer's story and here's a quote "Make a Visual Novel, without having to do any writing myself".

As fauxplayer mentioned, this is the definitely the new trend - popular erotica turned into daz spam.
You do realize that the linked Patreon (with 200 patrons) is of the writer and not the dev
 

ViperDevlin44

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Not a bad start though the chapters could have a bit more content but its early so i will watch with anticipation
 

Hyped

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You do realize that the linked Patreon (with 200 patrons) is of the writer and not the dev
I had no idea. Why would they not link to the dev's profile or page, even if on this site.

Guess I was totally wrong. Dev experimenting with his renders and linking to the original writer? That's pretty respectful. And shocking given the blatant plagiarism recently.
 
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Safetydummy

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Hmmm, that was an interesting story (so far) and the renders were done really well. Tabitha (sister) is pretty adorable- like a cross between Natalie Dormer and Billie Eilish. I don't think she'd be as striking/stunning without her MLP transformation hair. Lol

Props to the Dev for recognizing and acknowledging the creator of the story. T'is rare fer a pirate to be wit' morals...

I'm really curious/interested to this Dev's interpretation of the writer's tale. Good luck with this Dev!

Also, speaking of "festive things"...Time to stuff the turkey. ;)
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This is seriously, sexy...but I'm haunted by that image of Mr. Bean... Lol

P.S. Also, does anybody know if the "dings" for your responses indicated correct or incorrect answers? All of them had the option to "ding", except the "Borrow/Remember" path. :)
 

throwa

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Oh hey, thats not a bad idea to adapt already existing stories. Im hoping that sequence where you get her to drink a breast expansion potion, make her forget it happened and then do it again a few days later makes it into the game version.

EDIT: thats what I get for commenting first before playing. Its already hinted at, fuck yeah.
 

Hybris

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Having now read the story I have to say that I now really wish that this would expand on it rather follow it scene for scene. Still I can think of a few other stories like Eric Storm's Camp series (Link: ) That would be good candidates for a Renpy visualization.
 
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