VN Ren'Py Completed Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

[Walter Victor]

OK, about 0.65, which BTW I found nice and interesting.

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I think that Klaus could end up sleeping with the fishes.

 

[gestved]

I think its kinda funny, that people draw conclusions without even the character it's about been confronted or said her piece yet. So when a person (in this case, the MC), draw a conclusion "it must have been that way", then that's a confirmation of events that did happen?

Victor telling what he did, does not confirm whatever did or did not happen to Haley. But he does enlighten the MC in what might be the outcome of he pursue it.

I didn't draw a conclusion, I made a prediction, a speculation, this is fiction mate, speculating about what will happen is part of any good work of fiction. I don't need to wait for shit to be explained to try to make sense of things

Like I said, it could play out differently, maybe it was the father that took her virginity, maybe she drugged klaus and fucked him in his sleep, and she doesn't love the MC at all, it's all just a sick plot to break his heart, or maybe aliens came, inserted an anal probe into her, gave her fake memories of having relations with klaus and MC will have his dick shredded when sodomizing her. The possibilities are endless!

I just think this is by far the most likely scenario

 

[Anus Mundi]

You really need to go back to before the trip with Adriana. I'd go back to the beginning of v0.60 to be safe.

For the Adriana part: There is a complete new scene when you get on the business trip with her (and only for business reasons).

 

[Joshua Tree]

I didn't draw a conclusion, I made a prediction, a speculation, this is fiction mate, speculating about what will happen is part of any good work of fiction. I don't need to wait for shit to be explained to try to make sense of things

Like I said, it could play out differently, maybe it was the father that took her virginity, maybe she drugged klaus and fucked him in his sleep, and she doesn't love the MC at all, it's all just a sick plot to break his heart, or maybe aliens came, inserted an anal probe into her, gave her fake memories of having relations with klaus and MC will have his dick shredded when sodomizing her. The possibilities are endless!

I just think this is by far the most likely scenario

I didn't say you did draw a conclusion, I said the mc did...

 

[gestved]

well, I won't enter this topic again, it already been discussed to death, I probably would react in a similar way as he is, so I'm fine with it

 

[Ankhesenamun]

Just dropping by to emphasize how legitimately funny and dynamic the interactions between the MC and Haley are. It feels real and like true brother/sister banter, without constantly going "big bro! or "lil' sis", or calling each other by their family status every minute. It beats most dialogues by far, especially in [redacted] where you have to skip through 20-30 images of "you're such a virgin!", "no I'm not!", "you totally are!", "I'm not!", "Whatever you say... Virgin!", "I told you I'm not a virgin!", "Right, virgin!", "Will you stop calling me virgin?", "But you are!" and so fucking on and on.

 

[Ragnar]

So where are the ball gags, butt plugs and so on? Also what happened with the cake?
The update seems a bit rushed to me, consequence of having a tight monthly schedule I suppose.

 

[Walter Victor]

For the Adriana part: There is a complete new scene when you get on the business trip with her (and only for business reasons).

Right. That's why v0.60 was rewritten, and why so many people can't use their saves.

 

[Zoey Raven]

I disagree with you that Victor was portrayed more than a typical buddy prior to 0.60.

I find it weird that you are focusing at this As i have Already noted i concider it one of the minor fuck ups of the story.

I mean MC was getting wasted at a bar cause a loved one was abused at 0.60 and Victor misunderstood the situation and thought MC was drinking in his missery to oblivion cause he had find out that his Sister who he doesnt even know was abused 20 fucking years ago?

And you are focusing on victor-mcs relationship? The fuck up Is so minor in this case, especially after Dev decided to reveal the case in the exact same way to Adriana with whom if you didnt decide to fuck her in the past didnt even have any type of relationship.

Devs for one more time in Last updates fuck common logic Hard in the Ass and you feel the need to disagree if they are or arent caressing its hair while fucking it?

I dont care at all when the issue will be solved. They opened a path in 0.55. They Fucked it up big time until the middle of 0.65. One Dick after another against common logics bumm.

And then suddenly common logic seems to be getting restored.
They wasted 1,5 updates in order to do so. To clear the shit devs thrown Into their own story in 0.60 and to set a frame and Some rules of how things will proceed.

My expectation Is they will continue that way, regrardless how long it takes.
As long As they dont Start again dragging out the drama for the sake of drama, and they dont bring additonal shit Into their story.

People want the case to be resolved. Story to return to its previous state. A love story. It Cant be done at once. Biggest hope 0.65 gave Is that the twisted part of the story where the bs was coming one after another has ended.

A love story until 0.50. Then a bs after bs story until mid 0.65. Now a story about dealing with the aftermath of a rape story hopefully in a realistic definied by common sense manner.

Mcs haley relationship seems to be cooling off. Probably changing its nature in coming updates. Probably getting worse than prior to 0.55.

Still better in my perception than a relationship where you fuck a rape victim while she adresses you the way you believe adressesd her rapist. Or a mentally troubled traumatized woman. Even more when you are portrayed to love her.

Another indication how forced and out of place where Last updates? How they werent prescripted or predecisioned?

Lisa. Probably the most witty, sexy and intersesting side character. The only one MC hasnt fucked yet.
I Wonder how on hell MC can fuck her, and if He will under the current status of the story. He seems to growing and maturing. Trying to clear things out regarding his siderelationships. And still has to carry his main burdon dealing with Haleys case.

So Some People broke up with sandra. Things with haley seem to be cooling off. Fucking Lisa seems disconected from the current status of the story.

So i guess less porn more actual story Is coming up. Still way better than missery porn.

I respect your opinion, we can agree to disagree.

 

[Avaron1974]

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If for one second I thought we wouldn't have a Haley ending, I'd cancel my patronage straight away.

That would be awesome if that's an actual thing.

I put all my time and effort into the MC and Sandra and purposefully avoided as many point with Haley as I could to see if it would change anything.

Shocking news, it doesn't. I got all the same scenes whether I got every point or none of them so hope they mean something in the future.

I'd love for my main play through to have a solo Sandra ending.

 

[Walter Victor]

So where are the ball gags, butt plugs and so on? Also what happened with the cake?
The update seems a bit rushed to me, consequence of having a tight monthly schedule I suppose.

If any of that stuff happens, it will be near the end of the game. If any of it had been put into v0.65, the howling about it being inappropriate at this point of the story would have been horrific.

Since I read the script, I was able to sneak in while they were out and eat the cake. *BELCH*

 

[sm204900729]

I agree with rag. I played through the update within 25 minutes. I'd like to see updates that are larger and I would not mind even waiting 45 to 55 days between updates if it means longer content with secondary characters. It's been so long since we saw some characters that I forgot their names. I still love the story though.

 

[Walter Victor]

I respect your opinion, we can agree to disagree.

Arguing with that one is a waste of time. If he can't see that Victor is the MC's boss, that they play squash together on a regular basis, and that Victor's niece is in a relationship with the MC, and still can't recognize that that is enough for the MC to confide in him, even after Victor has taken the MC out drinking and gotten him drunk, no amount of reason is going to change his mind.

EDIT: Corrected Victor's relationship with Sandra. [Note to self... Get more sleep]

 

[Ragnar]

If any of that stuff happens, it will be near the end of the game. If any of it had been put into v0.65, the howling about it being inappropriate at this point of the story would have been horrific.

Since I read the script, I was able to sneak in while they were out and eat the cake. *BELCH*

Eh, Haley is into that stuff so MC must oblige

 

[ZTex]

Arguing with that one is a waste of time. If he can't see that Victor is the MC's boss, that they play squash together on a regular basis, and that Victor's sister is in a relationship with the MC, and still can't recognize that that is enough for the MC to confide in him, even after Victor has taken the MC out drinking and gotten him drunk, no amount of reason is going to change his mind.

Victor's Niece. Not his sister.
Small but important distinction.

 

[Walter Victor]

Victor's Niece. Not his sister.
Small but important distinction.

Ooops! I'd better correct that one. Sloppy! Sloppy! Sloppy!

 

[bauman]

What's with the talk 0.65 is short? It's without a doubt the largest update they have released so far (362 renders).

 

[Raziel474]

It's a shame Haley is a fucking degenerate, really killed the game form me. Shame, i was enjoying it a lot.
I get it most people don't share my point of view, but in game like these i believe its generally a better idea to make the main girl a virgin or drop her sex life out of the game altogether, when she is playing a sweet and innocent role whole game long. That really came out of nowhere.

I mean i realize i'm just bitching at this point, and that no one really gives a fuck, i guess i just need to let it out.
That moment when she tells you her past sexual partners, just broke all the empathy and immersion i had for the game. Her ingame personality doesn't event correspond to the way she would be if she really had the the experiences that she had in the game. That bomb was simply unnecessary.
Being well educated in psychology and knowing well what kind of consequences such actions leave on the human psyche and personality sure isn't helping. I understand that i cant expect a dev to have a phd in psychology and personality disorders but, man i'm just sad because i like this game so much. Making such a sweet girl and so many lovely interactions only to put her the category of women who are, mildly speaking, unfit for relationship, let alone something more, kicked me in the nuts hard.

I'm sorry for being a downer, i just had to let it out. I still support the dev and I'm looking forward to his future games.

 

[Zoey Raven]

Arguing with that one is a waste of time. If he can't see that Victor is the MC's boss, that they play squash together on a regular basis, and that Victor's niece is in a relationship with the MC, and still can't recognize that that is enough for the MC to confide in him, even after Victor has taken the MC out drinking and gotten him drunk, no amount of reason is going to change his mind.

EDIT: Corrected Victor's relationship with Sandra. [Note to self... Get more sleep]

I might have said the same, but prey tell it would have fallen on deaf ears.

 

[✝Fenrir✝]

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If for one second I thought we wouldn't have a Haley ending, I'd cancel my patronage straight away.

My points with her must be -50

I always pushed her away when I had the opportunity

It's hard to like her when the game pushes you to have a relationship with her

I'm looking at you too Sandra ... just kidding I love you